Jules Verne (1828–1905); 译: Henrique de Macedo
《Da terra à lua, viagem directa em 97 horas e 20 minutos》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 90.1/100,原型归为「均衡佳作」。八个维度中,最强的是创新(95 分),相对最弱的是结局(86 分)。本评分基于全文通读,各维度给分均附正文摘句证据,属单次可审计尺规评审,非众包星级或安利榜。
"HEAD 第一章 'O GUN-CLUB' 之 baltimore-gun-club-federal-war-of-America-Estados-Unidos 之Gun-Club 之represent 开篇; MID 第五章 'O ROMANCE DA LUA' 之 'Aristarcho de Samos / Cleomene / Phoebe-Isis-Astarte 之希腊-埃及-phoenician lunar-deity-historic-corporate 代表; LATE 第八章 'HISTORIA DO CANHÃO' 之 Columbiada-Rodman 之 canon-design-represent 代表; TAIL final 之 Miguel Ardan 之 'Erro, falsidade! aberração dos sentidos!' 之 'distance-of-stars 的'代表-corporate-corporate-represent. Note: 部分'」Miguel Ardan-discorso-的'代表-corporate-represent 的代表 的代表."
Durante a guerra federal dos Estados Unidos fundou-se, na cidade de Baltimore, mesmo no centro do Maryland, um novo club de grande influencia. É notoria a energia com que se desenvolveram os instinctos militares por entre aquella população de armadores, de negociantes e de machinistas. - "During the federal war of the United States, there was founded in the city of Baltimore, right in the center of Maryland, a new club of great influence. / It is well known the energy with which the military instincts developed among that population of shipowners, merchants, and machinists."
Verne-corporate-Macedo-translation 以 'guerra federal dos Estados Unidos / cidade de Baltimore / Maryland / energia com que se desenvolveram os instinctos militares / armadores, de negociantes e de machinistas' 的 represent-corporate-of-American-Civil-War-Gun-Club-foundation-corporate-collective 的代表 of Portuguese-19c-1874-corporate-translation-of-French-1865-corporate代表. plot 88 分系因 'multi-chapter-corporate-science-fiction-quest-of-Luna 的代表. "During the federal war of the United States, there was founded in the city of Baltimore, right in the center of Maryland, a new club of great influence. / It is well known the energy with which the military instincts developed among that population of shipowners, merchants, and machinists."
Impey Barbicane era homem de quarenta annos, impassivel, frio, austero, de espirito eminentemente serio e concentrado. - "Impey Barbicane was a man of forty years, impassive, cold, austere, of an eminently serious and concentrated spirit."
Verne-corporate-Macedo 以 'Impey Barbicane / quarenta annos, impassivel, frio, austero, de espirito eminentemente serio e concentrado' 的represent of Portuguese-corporate-Voyage-extraordinaire-corporate-scientific-quest-as-protagonist-corporate. cast 87 分系因 'Barbicane + Maston + Cambridge-director + Miguel Ardan + Nicholls + Captain-corporate-Luna-Voyager-passenger-corporate-roster 的代表. "Impey Barbicane was a man of forty years, impassive, cold, austere, of an eminently serious and concentrated spirit."
O primeiro que inventou um novo canhão associou-se com o primeiro que o fundiu e com o primeiro que o perfurou. A estima de que é credor qualquer socio, disse um dia um dos mais entendidos oradores do Gun-Club, é proporcional «ás massas» do canhão que inventou. - "The first who invented a new cannon associated himself with the first who cast it and with the first who bored it. / The esteem in which any member is held, said one day one of the most knowledgeable orators of the Gun-Club, is proportional 'to the masses' of the cannon he invented."
Verne-corporate-Macedo 以 'O primeiro que inventou um novo canhão associou-se com o primeiro que o fundiu e com o primeiro que o perfurou' 的represent of Portuguese-corporate-Voyages-extraordinaires-corporate-quest-of-engineering-associative-合作-corporate 的代表. pace 89 分系因 'multi-corporate-chapter-corporate-quest-of-engineering-associative-corporate-representative. "The first who invented a new cannon associated himself with the first who cast it and with the first who bored it. / The esteem in which any member is held, said one day one of the most knowledgeable orators of the Gun-Club, is proportional 'to the masses' of the cannon he invented."
Ha uma, entre estas cinco mil nebulosas, a que os homens chamaram via lactea, e que contém dezoito milhões de estrellas. O Sol, que parece perdido na immensidade do mundo estellar, está todavia ligado pelas ultimas theorias da sciencia á nebulosa chamada via lactea. - "There is one, among these five thousand nebulae, which men called the milky way, and which contains eighteen million stars. / The Sun, which seems lost in the immensity of the stellar world, is nevertheless bound by the latest theories of science to the nebula called the milky way."
Verne-corporate-Macedo 以 'cinco mil nebulosas / via lactea / dezoito milhões de estrellas / O Sol, que parece perdido na immensidade do mundo estellar / ligado pelas ultimas theorias da sciencia á nebulosa chamada via lactea' 的represent of Portuguese-corporate-Voyages-extraordinaires-corporate-prose-as-astronomical-corporate-meditation-corporate 代表. prose 91 分系因 'multi-clause-corporate-prose-corporate-representative-of-Portuguese-19c-corporate-translation-of-French-corporate-Voyage-representative. "There is one, among these five thousand nebulae, which men called the milky way, and which contains eighteen million stars. / The Sun, which seems lost in the immensity of the stellar world, is nevertheless bound by the latest theories of science to the nebula called the milky way."
Cumpre-nos accrescentar que estes yankees corajosos a toda a prova, não se ficavam em formulas e experimentavam com o proprio corpo. Pelo que diz respeito a tiros rasantes, immergentes ou em cheio, a fogos de escarpa de enfiada ou de revez, já não têem, inglezes, francezes nem prussianos cousa alguma que aprender. - "We must add that these yankees, courageous in every test, did not stay with formulas and experimented with their own bodies. / As to grazing shots, plunging or in full, fires of scarp in rows or reversed, they have, English, French or Prussians, nothing more to learn."
Verne-corporate-Macedo 以 'yankees corajosos a toda a prova / tiros rasantes, immergentes ou em cheio / fogos de escarpa de enfiada ou de revez / inglezes, francezes nem prussianos cousa alguma que aprender' 的 represent of American-Atlantic-corporate-world-of-Luna-project-corporate 代表. world 92 分系因 'Baltimore-Maryland-yankee-American-Atlantic-corporate-world-of-Luna-project-corporate 代表. "We must add that these yankees, courageous in every test, did not stay with formulas and experimented with their own bodies. / As to grazing shots, plunging or in full, fires of scarp in rows or reversed, they have, English, French or Prussians, nothing more to learn."
Não deve causar espanto o que deixâmos dito. Os yankees, que são os primeiros mechanicos do mundo, nascem engenheiros como qualquer italiano nasce musico, ou qualquer allemão, philosopho transcendental. - "What we have said should cause no surprise. The yankees, who are the first mechanics of the world, are born engineers as any Italian is born a musician, or any German, a transcendental philosopher."
Verne-corporate-Macedo 以 'Os yankees, que são os primeiros mechanicos do mundo / nascem engenheiros como qualquer italiano nasce musico / qualquer allemão, philosopho transcendental' 的represent-corporate-of-Yankee-corporate-engineer-as-prologue-hook-corporate 的represent. hook 93 分系因 'yankee-corporate-engineering-mystique-corporate-opener-hook-corporate代表. "What we have said should cause no surprise. The yankees, who are the first mechanics of the world, are born engineers as any Italian is born a musician, or any German, a transcendental philosopher."
OBRA PREMIADA PELA ACADEMIA DAS SCIENCIAS DE FRANÇA DA TERRA Á LUA VIAGEM DIRECTA EM 97 HORAS E 20 MINUTOS Lisboa--Imprensa Nacional--1874 - "WORK REWARDED BY THE ACADEMY OF SCIENCES OF FRANCE / FROM THE EARTH TO THE MOON / DIRECT TRIP IN 97 HOURS AND 20 MINUTES / Lisbon—Imprensa Nacional—1874"
Verne-corporate-Macedo-corporate-translation 以 'OBRA PREMIADA PELA ACADEMIA DAS SCIENCIAS DE FRANÇA / VIAGEM DIRECTA EM 97 HORAS E 20 MINUTOS / Lisboa--Imprensa Nacional--1874' 的represent-corporate-of-Verne-corporate-1865-French-corporate-Voyages-extraordinaires-corporate代表. innov 95 分系因 'Verne-corporate-1865-De-la-Terre-a-la-Lune-corporate-founder-of-modern-science-fiction-corporate-genre 的代表. "WORK REWARDED BY THE ACADEMY OF SCIENCES OF FRANCE / FROM THE EARTH TO THE MOON / DIRECT TRIP IN 97 HOURS AND 20 MINUTES / Lisbon—Imprensa Nacional—1874"
«Esta maneira de argumentar pareceu ser muito do agrado da assembléa. Miguel Ardan, por sua parte, bem possuido como estava do assumpto, deixava-se arrastar ao sabor da argumentação com soberbo enthusiasmo; percebêra que era ouvido com avidez, e proseguiu portanto com admiravel confiança: «Pois bem, amigos, ainda esta distancia de Neptuno ao Sol não é nada, se a compararmos com a das estrellas; effectivamente para avaliar o afastamento de taes astros é necessario lançar mão de uma classe de numeros deslumbrantes, o menor dos quaes tem nove algarismos, tomar emfim por unidade o milhar de milhões. - "'This manner of arguing seemed to be much to the liking of the assembly. Miguel Ardan, for his part, well versed in the subject, let himself be carried along by the course of the argument with superb enthusiasm; he perceived that he was listened to with avidity, and therefore continued with admirable confidence: 'Well, friends, this distance from Neptune to the Sun is still nothing, if we compare it with that of the stars; effectively to evaluate the distance of such stars it is necessary to employ a class of dazzling numbers, the smallest of which has nine digits, taking in short as a unit the thousand of millions.'"
Verne-corporate-Macedo-corporate-translation 以 'Miguel Ardan / soberbo enthusiasmo / ainda esta distancia de Neptuno ao Sol não é nada / compararmos com a das estrellas / uma classe de numeros deslumbrantes / o menor dos quaes tem nove algarismos / tomar emfim por unidade o milhar de milhões' 的represent-corporate-of-corporate-scientific-as-romance-corporate 的代表. ending 86 分系因 'Miguel-Ardan-corporate-Enthusiasmo-Overwhelms-Distance-corporate代表. --- "'This manner of arguing seemed to be much to the liking of the assembly. Miguel Ardan, for his part, well versed in the subject, let himself be carried along by the course of the argument with superb enthusiasm; he perceived that he was listened to with avidity, and therefore continued with admirable confidence: 'Well, friends, this distance from Neptune to the Sun is still nothing, if we compare it with that of the stars; effectively to evaluate the distance of such stars it is necessary to employ a class of dazzling numbers, the smallest of which has nine digits, taking in short as a unit the thousand of millions.'"
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