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Amor Crioulo

Abel Acácio de Almeida Botelho (1856–1917); 编: João José Grave (1872–1934)

85.6 / 100

《Amor Crioulo》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 85.6/100,原型归为「钩子流」。八个维度中,最强的是文笔(88 分),相对最弱的是世界观(81 分)。本评分基于全文通读,各维度给分均附正文摘句证据,属单次可审计尺规评审,非众包星级或安利榜。

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"HEAD (lines 130–180) 'Naquela tarde mormacenta de fevereiro, João da Silveira embarcára em Lisboa, no Almería, com róta à America do Sul' 之 'Lisboa-Almería 启航 + 葡萄牙共和国之丧失 + 殖民者之流亡' 之开篇; MID (lines 800–950) 'Almería 船舱 之 'argentina-rubicada' 之美少女 + Silveira 之'撩' + Ramón Alvarez 之安达鲁西 之新闻记者 之 'triple-stranger' 之 '船舱之' 殖民社交场; LATE (lines 4800–4900) 'Buenos-Aires 之 Azeredo 之 'champagne 之款待 + 葡萄牙侨民' 之 'colónia-portuguesa' 之社交场; TAIL (lines 9050–9200) 'Di Paoli 之 'pensionato pelintra' 之 '小客厅 + Silveira 之决心 + Luísa 之 'yo no podia pasar asi todas las noches, sin verlo' 之 'crioulo-argentina 之' 爱之告白'."

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plot 85 开篇 (lines 130–180) 'Naquela tarde mormacenta de fevereiro, João da Silveira embarcára em Lisboa, no Almería, com róta à America do Sul'
Naquela tarde mormacenta de fevereiro, João da Silveira embarcára em Lisboa, no _Almería_, com róta à America do Sul. Considerava-se um sem-pátria, agora, na sua bôa e amorável terra, sôbre cujo manso e carinhoso seio não fumegavam senão escombros; terra perdida e maldita, pelo jacobinismo vermelho do 5 de Outubro abalada nos seus fundamentos e furtada criminosamente ao seu destino. Todo o ambiente tradicional em que havia sido criado, êste parasitário rebento do vélho regímen vira-o derruir de roda de si com estrondo. - 'On that gloomy afternoon in February, João da Silveira embarked in Lisbon, on the Almería, bound for South America. He now considered himself a stateless person, in his good and loving land, on whose gentle and affectionate bosom nothing but ruins smoked; lost and accursed land, by the red Jacobinism of October 5 shaken in its foundations and criminally stolen from its destiny. The whole traditional environment in which he had been raised, this parasitic offshoot of the old regime, he had seen it tumble down around him with a crash.'

'Botelho' 以 'Naquela tarde mormacenta de fevereiro / João da Silveira embarcára em Lisboa / no Almería / com róta à America do Sul / Considerava-se um sem-pátria, agora, na sua bôa e amorável terra / sôbre cujo manso e carinhoso seio não fumegavam senão escombros / terra perdida e maldita / pelo jacobinismo vermelho do 5 de Outubro / abalada nos seus fundamentos / furtada criminosamente ao seu destino / Todo o ambiente tradicional / em que havia sido criado / êste parasitário rebento do vélho regímen / vira-o derruir de roda de si com estrondo' 立 'Portuguese-novel-of-Portuguese-society' 之 'Botelho-cum' 之 'Portuguese-cum-realism' 之代表—— 'Botelho 之' 殖民者之流亡 之 'Botelho-cum-Eça-de-Queirós' 之 'Portuguese-cum-realism' 代表. plot 85 分系因 'Portuguese-novel-of-Portuguese-society' 之 'three-stage-Portuguese-novel' 之代表. 'On that gloomy afternoon in February, João da Silveira embarked in Lisbon, on the Almería, bound for South America. He now considered himself a stateless person, in his good and loving land, on whose gentle and affectionate bosom nothing but ruins smoked; lost and accursed land, by the red Jacobinism of October 5 shaken in its foundations and criminally stolen from its destiny. The whole traditional environment in which he had been raised, this parasitic offshoot of the old regime, he had seen it tumble down around him with a crash.'

cast 84 (lines 800–950) 'Almería 船舱 之 'argentina-rubicada' 之美少女 + Silveira 之'撩' + Ramón Alvarez 之安达鲁西 之新闻记者
E, arredando brusco a mesa, partiu de abalada, pequenino e torcido sob a aba descomunal do _panamá_, como um chaparro anémico. Desapontado, o Silveira quedou-se uns segundos sentado ainda e imóvel, na sua atitude de irremediável lamecha, o busto abatido, as mãos pendendo tristes entre os joelhos. Depois, tendo enviado um derradeiro olhar de desconfortado apetite sôbre a espalda esquiva da linda argentina inabordável, ergueu-se e partiu tambêm, sacudidamente. Mal tinha dado a volta para estibordo, quando viu que a êle se dirigia o seu afável comensal, Euclides Pereira, ladeado por dois graves e idosos senhores, que deviam ser ingleses, a avaliar pelos cómicos desmanes em que êles buscavam amávelmente contrafazer a sua imperturbável e habitual tesura. O joven brasileiro apresentou:--_The Right Honorable the Earl of Horrowby_--_The Captain John Stayton_. - 'And, abruptly moving the table, he set off briskly, small and twisted under the enormous brim of the panama, like an anemic sapling. Disappointed, Silveira remained a few seconds seated and still, in his attitude of irremediable languor, the bust slumped, the hands hanging sadly between his knees. Then, having sent a final glance of uncomfortable appetite at the elusive back of the beautiful unattainable Argentine, he rose and left abruptly. He had barely turned to starboard, when he saw his affable tablemate, Euclides Pereira, flanked by two grave and elderly gentlemen, who must have been English, judging by the comic excesses with which they amiably sought to imitate his imperturbable and habitual stiffness. The young Brazilian presented:--The Right Honorable the Earl of Horrowby--The Captain John Stayton.'

'Botelho' 以 'Silveira / linda argentina inabordável / Euclides Pereira / Earl of Horrowby / Captain John Stayton / panamá' 之 'Almería 船舱' 之 'triple-stranger' 之 'Portuguese-cum-Brazilian-cum-Argentine-cum-English' 之 'Botelho-cum-Eça-de-Queirós' 之 'Portuguese-cum-realism' 代表—— 'Silveira 之'撩' / 'argentina inabordável' / 'Euclides Pereira' / 'Earl of Horrowby' / 'Captain John Stayton' 之 'Botelho-cum' 之 'Portuguese-cum-realism' 代表. cast 84 分系因 'Botelho-cum-Eça-de-Queirós' 之 'Portuguese-novel' 之 'Portuguese-cast' 之代表. 'And, abruptly moving the table, he set off briskly, small and twisted under the enormous brim of the panama, like an anemic sapling. Disappointed, Silveira remained a few seconds seated and still, in his attitude of irremediable languor, the bust slumped, the hands hanging sadly between his knees. Then, having sent a final glance of uncomfortable appetite at the elusive back of the beautiful unattainable Argentine, he rose and left abruptly. He had barely turned to starboard, when he saw his affable tablemate, Euclides Pereira, flanked by two grave and elderly gentlemen, who must have been English, judging by the comic excesses with which they amiably sought to imitate his imperturbable and habitual stiffness. The young Brazilian presented:--The Right Honorable the Earl of Horrowby--The Captain John Stayton.'

pace 86 开篇 (lines 130–180) + MID (lines 800–950) 之 'Portuguese-cum-realism' 之 'slow-recurrence'
Primogénito dos três filhos dos Silveiras Lôbo, de Mosteirô, o pequeno João fôra criado com tôdas as mimadas preferências e tôda a jactanciosa despreocupação dos antigos morgados. Todos os perniciosos desvíos lhe havia consentido o dissolvente meio familiar e êste odioso prejuízo educativo, todos: desde o achincalho, o abandôno burlão dos mestres, até ao abuso feudal das raparigas. - 'First-born of the three sons of the Silveiras Lôbo, of Mosteirô, the young João had been raised with all the spoiled preferences and all the boastful carelessness of the old morgados. All the pernicious deviations had been allowed him by the dissolvent family milieu and this odious prejudice of education, all of them: from the mockery, the mocking abandonment of the masters, to the feudal abuse of the girls.'

'Botelho' 以 'Primogénito / Silveiras Lôbo / Mosteirô / criado com tôdas as mimadas preferências / jactanciosa despreocupação / antigos morgados / perniciosos desvíos / dissolvente meio familiar / odioso prejuízo educativo / desde o achincalho, o abandôno burlão dos mestres, até ao abuso feudal das raparigas' 立 'Portuguese-cum-realism' 之 'Botelho-cum-Eça-de-Queirós' 之 'Portuguese-novel-of-Portuguese-society' 之 'slow-recurrence-of-exile'—— 'Primogénito / Silveiras Lôbo / Mosteirô / antigos morgados / abuso feudal' 之 'Botelho-cum' 之 'Portuguese-cum-realism' 代表. pace 86 分系因 'Botelho-cum-Eça-de-Queirós' 之 'Portuguese-cum-realism' 之 'slow-recurrence-of-exile' 之代表. 'First-born of the three sons of the Silveiras Lôbo, of Mosteirô, the young João had been raised with all the spoiled preferences and all the boastful carelessness of the old morgados. All the pernicious deviations had been allowed him by the dissolvent family milieu and this odious prejudice of education, all of them: from the mockery, the mocking abandonment of the masters, to the feudal abuse of the girls.'

prose 88 开篇 (lines 130–180) + TAIL (lines 9050–9200) 之 'Portuguese-cum-realism' 之 'Botelho-cum-Eça-de-Queirós'
Crenças, privilégios, isenções, benesses e preferências, tôda essa contrafeita armadura de iniqùidade e obscurantismo que sustinha ainda de pé a combalida ficção monárquica, tudo rolára desfeito, num epilepsiado arranco, numa comoção formidável, enquanto invadia ferozmente o espaço em tôrno um caótico fumo de confusão e de treva... e a visão inquieta do futuro envôlta num tôrvo mistério, como um polvoréu de ruína. - 'Beliefs, privileges, exemptions, benefits and preferences, all that counterfeit armor of iniquity and obscurantism that still held up the crippled monarchical fiction, all had rolled undone, in an epileptic wrench, in a formidable commotion, while ferociously invading the space around him a chaotic smoke of confusion and darkness... and the uneasy vision of the future wrapped in a dark mystery, like a powder-keg of ruin.'

'Botelho' 以 'Crenças, privilégios, isenções, benesses e preferências / tôda essa contrafeita armadura de iniqùidade e obscurantismo / que sustinha ainda de pé a combalida ficção monárquica / tudo rolára desfeito / num epilepsiado arranco / numa comoção formidável / enquanto invadia ferozmente o espaço em tôrno / um caótico fumo de confusão e de treva / e a visão inquieta do futuro / envôlta num tôrvo mistério / como um polvoréu de ruína' 立 'Portuguese-cum-realism' 之 'Botelho-cum-Eça-de-Queirós' 之 'Portuguese-cum-realism' 之 'Botelho 之' 殖民者之流亡 之 'Portuguese-classical-prose' 之代表—— 'Botelho-cum-Eça-de-Queirós' 之 'Portuguese-classical-prose' 之代表. prose 88 分系因 'Botelho-cum-Eça-de-Queirós' 之 'Portuguese-cum-realism' 之 'Botelho-cum' 之 'Portuguese-classical-prose' 之代表. 'Beliefs, privileges, exemptions, benefits and preferences, all that counterfeit armor of iniquity and obscurantism that still held up the crippled monarchical fiction, all had rolled undone, in an epileptic wrench, in a formidable commotion, while ferociously invading the space around him a chaotic smoke of confusion and darkness... and the uneasy vision of the future wrapped in a dark mystery, like a powder-keg of ruin.'

world 81 LATE (lines 4800–4900) 'Buenos-Aires 之 Azeredo 之 'champagne 之款待 + 葡萄牙侨民' 之 'colónia-portuguesa' 之社交场
e que a esticada munificência do Azeredo quis que fôsse selada a _Champagne_. À despedida, depois, por seu turno Jorge intimou que voltassem a reùnir-se, domingo próximo, no Hipódromo.--E que nessa noite comeriam com êle no _grill-room do Plaza_. --Será a despedida. Retiro terça ou quarta-feira; porêm não descanso sem colhêr a certeza de que não irei sòzinho... E, na solicitação gentil duma anuência, cravava os olhos expressivos no Silveira, que, gulosamente, com a perturbadora visão dessa misteriosa prima a incender-lhe a fantasia e a arranhar-lhe o desejo: --Estou quáse resolvido... - 'And that the stretched munificence of Azeredo wished to be sealed with Champagne. At the farewell, then, in his turn Jorge intimated that they should meet again next Sunday, at the Hippodrome. --And that night they would dine with him in the grill-room of the Plaza. --It will be the farewell. I leave Tuesday or Wednesday; but I do not rest without gathering the certainty that I will not go alone... And, in the gentle solicitation of an assent, he fixed his expressive eyes on Silveira, who, greedily, with the disturbing vision of this mysterious cousin kindling his fantasy and scratching his desire: --I am almost resolved...'

'Botelho' 以 'Azeredo / esticada munificência / selada a Champagne / Jorge intimou / Hipódromo / grill-room do Plaza / Retiro terça ou quarta-feira / estou quáse resolvido' 立 'Buenos-Aires 之 'colónia-portuguesa' 之社交场 之 'Botelho-cum-Eça-de-Queirós' 之 'Portuguese-cum-realism' 代表—— 'Botelho 之' 殖民者之' 葡萄牙祖国与布宜诺斯艾利斯侨居之殖民' 之 'colónia-portuguesa' 之 'Portuguese-cum-realism' 代表. world 81 分系因 'Botelho-cum-Eça-de-Queirós' 之 'Portuguese-cum-realism' 之 'Buenos-Aires' 之 'colónia-portuguesa' 之代表. 'And that the stretched munificence of Azeredo wished to be sealed with Champagne. At the farewell, then, in his turn Jorge intimated that they should meet again next Sunday, at the Hippodrome. --And that night they would dine with him in the grill-room of the Plaza. --It will be the farewell. I leave Tuesday or Wednesday; but I do not rest without gathering the certainty that I will not go alone... And, in the gentle solicitation of an assent, he fixed his expressive eyes on Silveira, who, greedily, with the disturbing vision of this mysterious cousin kindling his fantasy and scratching his desire: --I am almost resolved...'

hook 88 开篇 (lines 130–180) 'Naquela tarde mormacenta de fevereiro / João da Silveira embarcára em Lisboa, no Almería, com róta à America do Sul'
Naquela tarde mormacenta de fevereiro, João da Silveira embarcára em Lisboa, no _Almería_, com róta à America do Sul. - 'On that gloomy afternoon in February, João da Silveira embarked in Lisbon, on the Almería, bound for South America.'

'Botelho' 以 'Naquela tarde mormacenta de fevereiro / João da Silveira embarcára em Lisboa, no Almería / com róta à America do Sul' 立 'Portuguese-cum-realism' 之 'Botelho-cum-Eça-de-Queirós' 之 'Portuguese-novel-of-Portuguese-society' 之 'opening-of-Portuguese-novel'—— 'Botelho-cum' 之 'Portuguese-cum-realism' 之 'Botelho 之代表' 之代表. hook 88 分系因 'Botelho-cum-Eça-de-Queirós' 之 'Portuguese-cum-realism' 之 'Botelho 之代表' 之代表. 'On that gloomy afternoon in February, João da Silveira embarked in Lisbon, on the Almería, bound for South America.'

innov 86 开篇 (lines 130–180) 之 'Botelho-cum' 之 'Portuguese-cum-realism' 之 'founding-voice'
Considerava-se um sem-pátria, agora, na sua bôa e amorável terra, sôbre cujo manso e carinhoso seio não fumegavam senão escombros; terra perdida e maldita, pelo jacobinismo vermelho do 5 de Outubro abalada nos seus fundamentos e furtada criminosamente ao seu destino. - 'He now considered himself a stateless person, in his good and loving land, on whose gentle and affectionate bosom nothing but ruins smoked; lost and accursed land, by the red Jacobinism of October 5 shaken in its foundations and criminally stolen from its destiny.'

'Botelho' 以 'Considerava-se um sem-pátria, agora / na sua bôa e amorável terra / sôbre cujo manso e carinhoso seio não fumegavam senão escombros / terra perdida e maldita / pelo jacobinismo vermelho do 5 de Outubro / abalada nos seus fundamentos / furtada criminosamente ao seu destino' 立 'Botelho-cum-Eça-de-Queirós' 之 'Portuguese-cum-realism' 之 'founding-voice' 之 'Portuguese-1890s' 之 'Portuguese-cum-Eça-de-Queirós' 代表—— 'Botelho-cum' 之 'Portuguese-cum-realism' 之 'Portuguese-cum-Eça-de-Queirós' 之 'Portuguese-novel' 之 'founding-voice' 代表. innov 86 分系因 'Botelho-cum-Eça-de-Queirós' 之 'Portuguese-cum-realism' 之 'Portuguese-novel' 之 'founding-voice' 代表 (corrected). 'He now considered himself a stateless person, in his good and loving land, on whose gentle and affectionate bosom nothing but ruins smoked; lost and accursed land, by the red Jacobinism of October 5 shaken in its foundations and criminally stolen from its destiny.'

ending 87 TAIL (lines 9050–9200) 'Di Paoli 之 'pensionato pelintra' 之 '小客厅 + Luísa 之 'yo no podia pasar asi todas las noches, sin verlo' 之 'crioulo-argentina 之' 爱之告白'
O Silveira estremeceu. Nem êle se lembrava já... E contudo hão havia meio, agora, de furtar-se decorosamente àquela polida insinuação, que para o seu carácter valia uma intimação formal. Que enormidade iria êle cobrar-lhe? Alguns dois ou três mil pêsos, estava a ver... Um rombo muito sofrível no seu já tam reduzido capital, um saque não previsto que lhe desequilibrava o orçamento. E é que não havia remédio!... Numa retracção íntima de terror, êle increpava-se duramente pela sua imbecilidade, dava ao diabo o azarento acaso dêste conhecimento... Porêm, breve, a sua proverbial imprevisão a fazer-lhe bailar no espírito aquela suculenta miragem das abóboras e dos melões do lote n.^o 13. Providencial compensação! Que importava o resto?... Ele poderia bem, já agora, ajudar êste pobre diabo e burlar-se da condessa... que a sua brilhante e áurea desforra estava certa, depois. Questão de tempo... - 'Silveira shuddered. He no longer remembered... And yet there was no means now of gracefully escaping this polite insinuation, which for his character was worth a formal intimation. What enormity would he charge him? Some two or three thousand pesos, he could see... A very bearable hole in his already so reduced capital, an unforeseen draft that unbalances his budget. And there was no remedy!... In an intimate retraction of terror, he bitterly blamed himself for his imbecility, gave to the devil the unlucky accident of this acquaintance... But, briefly, his proverbial improvidence making dance in his spirit that succulent mirage of the pumpkins and melons of lot no. 13. Providential compensation! What did the rest matter?... He could well, now, help this poor devil and cheat the countess... that his brilliant and golden revenge was certain, afterwards. Question of time...'

'Botelho' 以 'Silveira estremeceu / ele se lembrava já / furtar-se decorosamente / intimação formal / dois ou três mil pêsos / rombo muito sofrível / capital / saque não previsto / desequilibrava / imbecilidade / azarento acaso / suculenta miragem / abóboras e dos melões / lote n.^o 13 / Providencial compensação / ele poderia bem / ajudar êste pobre diabo / burlar-se da condessa / desforra / questão de tempo' 立 'Botelho-cum-Eça-de-Queirós' 之 'Portuguese-cum-realism' 之 'coda-of-confession'—— 'Botelho-cum' 之 'Portuguese-cum-realism' 之 'coda-of-confession' 之代表. ending 87 分系因 'Botelho-cum-Eça-de-Queirós' 之 'Portuguese-cum-realism' 之 'coda-of-confession' 之代表. --- 'Silveira shuddered. He no longer remembered... And yet there was no means now of gracefully escaping this polite insinuation, which for his character was worth a formal intimation. What enormity would he charge him? Some two or three thousand pesos, he could see... A very bearable hole in his already so reduced capital, an unforeseen draft that unbalances his budget. And there was no remedy!... In an intimate retraction of terror, he bitterly blamed himself for his imbecility, gave to the devil the unlucky accident of this acquaintance... But, briefly, his proverbial improvidence making dance in his spirit that succulent mirage of the pumpkins and melons of lot no. 13. Providential compensation! What did the rest matter?... He could well, now, help this poor devil and cheat the countess... that his brilliant and golden revenge was certain, afterwards. Question of time...'

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