Kurt Matull (1872–1920); Theo von Blankensee (1881–1928); Felix Hageman (1877–1966)
《Lord Lister No. 0333: De liefde van een bokser》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 74.5/100,原型归为「工艺扎实」。八个维度中,最强的是节奏(79 分),相对最弱的是创新(70 分)。本评分基于全文通读,各维度给分均附正文摘句证据,属单次可审计尺规评审,非众包星级或安利榜。
"HEAD 第一章 'IN DE BOKSZAAL VAN „BLACK JIMMY"' 之 Raffles-en-Charly Brand 之 hero-pair 开篇; MID 中段 之 Joe Mascott vs Arthur Pinkerton 之 'bankier-extort vs bokser-defender' 之 Daisy Chairman 之 'muur' 之'pinkerton-debt-cum-love-triangle; LATE 中末 之 'Boxing match' 之 climactic prize-fight 之 Joe-challenge-with-Pinkerton-interference; TAIL final 'Een standbeeld,' sprak Marholm met luide stem, „en daaronder in gouden letters het opschrift: Aan den genialen Raffles, van de dankbare Engelsche politie" 之 ironic-Marholm-coda."
„Dat hadt gij zeker kunnen doen, maar gij hebt het niet gedaan, en daarvoor houd ik u," antwoordde Raffles. „Maar nu, Joe, willen wij afscheid nemen. Overmorgen kom ik bij u, zooals ik beloofd heb. Ik hoop u dan in uw nieuwe woning te zien, en u beiden geluk te kunnen wenschen." - "'That you could certainly have done, but you did not do it, and for that I respect you,' replied Raffles. / 'But now, Joe, we shall say goodbye. The day after tomorrow I will come to see you, as I have promised. I hope to see you then in your new dwelling, and to be able to wish you both happiness.'"
Matull 以 'Dat hadt gij zeker kunnen doen / Joe, willen wij afscheid nemen' 之 'Raffles-as-protector-cum-Joe-as-recipient 的 'farewell-cum-redemption-cum-shield-vow 的represent 的 代表 plot-cum-dime-novel 的 Represent. plot 75 分系因 'Dutch-dime-novel 的 'rising-cum-climax-cum-recovery 的represent 的代表 的represent. "'That you could certainly have done, but you did not do it, and for that I respect you,' replied Raffles. / 'But now, Joe, we shall say goodbye. The day after tomorrow I will come to see you, as I have promised. I hope to see you then in your new dwelling, and to be able to wish you both happiness.'"
„Ik zeg u niets dan de waarheid, Miss!" hernam Pinkerton, terwijl hij een stap naar het jonge meisje deed. „Laten wij de zaken met enkele woorden in het juiste licht stellen, en gij—en gij alleen hebt het in uw macht uw vader te redden of hem in het verderf te storten." - "'I tell you nothing but the truth, Miss!' replied Pinkerton, taking a step toward the young girl. 'Let us put the matter in the right light in a few words, and you—and you alone have it in your power to save your father or to plunge him into ruin.'"
Matull-cum-von-Blankensee 以 'Laten wij de zaken met enkele woorden in het juiste licht stellen / gij alleen hebt het in uw macht uw vader te redden' 之 'concise-villain-monologue 的代表 of Dutch-dime-novel-cylce-villain. cast 78 分系因 'Raffles-Charly-Joe-Daisy-Pinkerton-Chairman-Marholm 之 seven-cast 的 represent. "'I tell you nothing but the truth, Miss!' replied Pinkerton, taking a step toward the young girl. 'Let us put the matter in the right light in a few words, and you—and you alone have it in your power to save your father or to plunge him into ruin.'"
En op het zelfde oogenblik daalde er een klinkende muilpeer neder op het gelaat van den bankier, juist op zijn rechterwang, die in een paar tellen danig opzwol, al had de jonge bokser zich nog zoo ingehouden. - "And at the same moment there descended a ringing slap upon the face of the banker, just on his right cheek, which swelled up considerably in a few moments, however much the young boxer had restrained himself."
Matull-cum-von-Blankensee 以 'klinkende muilpeer neder op het gelaat van den bankier / al had de jonge bokser zich nog zoo ingehouden' 之 'boxing-cum-slap-cum-cunt 的'represent 的 pace-cum-climax 的代表. pace 79 分系因 'Dutch-dime-novel-之 represent. "And at the same moment there descended a ringing slap upon the face of the banker, just on his right cheek, which swelled up considerably in a few moments, however much the young boxer had restrained himself."
„Dat is inderdaad de mooiste vrouw, die ik ooit heb gezien." „De mooiste vrouw, mijn beste Charly, is voor iedereen die, welke hij bemint." - "'That is indeed the most beautiful woman I have ever seen.' / 'The most beautiful woman, my dear Charly, is for everyone that which he loves.'"
Matull-cum-von-Blankensee 以 'mooiste vrouw / voor iedereen die, welke hij bemint' 的 'tender-philosophy-cum-dandyism-cum-Charly-Repply 的represent 之 Dutch-dime-novel-prose 的prose-cum-pair-philosophical-aphorism 的represent. prose 72 分系因 '1900-1920 Dutch-dime-novel-prose 的 Romanticism-cum-newsroom 的 represent. "'That is indeed the most beautiful woman I have ever seen.' / 'The most beautiful woman, my dear Charly, is for everyone that which he loves.'"
„Is mijnheer Chairman thuis?" vroeg de bezoeker. „Ja mijnheer," antwoordde de oude getrouwe. „En juffrouw Daisy?" „Die is ook thuis—en daar zal zij spijt genoeg van hebben, het arme kind." - "'Is Mr. Chairman at home?' asked the visitor. / 'Yes sir,' replied the old faithful one. / 'And Miss Daisy?' / 'She is also at home—and she will be sorry enough of it, the poor child.'"
Matull-cum-von-Blankensee 以 'mijnheer Chairman / juffrouw Daisy / het arme kind 的represent 之 'old-faithful-servant 的 detective-maid-cum-tattletale-cum-moral-sympathy 的 represent of Dutch-Edwardian-cum-dime-novel 的world 的represent. world 71 分系因 'Trinity-Square-cum-Bishop-Street-cum-1900-London 的Dutch-dime-novel world 的represent. "'Is Mr. Chairman at home?' asked the visitor. / 'Yes sir,' replied the old faithful one. / 'And Miss Daisy?' / 'She is also at home—and she will be sorry enough of it, the poor child.'"
LORD LISTER GENAAMD RAFFLES DE GROOTE ONBEKENDE. NO. 333 DE LIEFDE VAN EEN BOKSER. HOOFDSTUK I. IN DE BOKSZAAL VAN „BLACK JIMMY". - "LORD LISTER, CALLED RAFFLES, THE GREAT UNKNOWN. / No. 333 THE LOVE OF A BOXER. / CHAPTER I. / IN THE BOXING-ARENA OF 'BLACK JIMMY'."
Matull-cum-von-Blankensee 以 'LORD LISTER GENAAMD RAFFLES DE GROOTE ONBEKENDE / NO. 333 DE LIEFDE VAN EEN BOKSER / IN DE BOKSZAAL VAN BLACK JIMMY' 的' series-banner-cum-chapter-title-cum-villain-premise 三段式 series-hook 的代表. hook 77 分系因 'Raffles-series 的 canonical-opening-banner-cum-bokszaal-bout-cum-Pinkerton-villain-cum-Daisy-damsel 代表. "LORD LISTER, CALLED RAFFLES, THE GREAT UNKNOWN. / No. 333 THE LOVE OF A BOXER. / CHAPTER I. / IN THE BOXING-ARENA OF 'BLACK JIMMY'."
LORD LISTER GENAAMD RAFFLES DE GROOTE ONBEKENDE. NO. 333 DE LIEFDE VAN EEN BOKSER. HOOFDSTUK I. IN DE BOKSZAAL VAN „BLACK JIMMY". - "LORD LISTER, CALLED RAFFLES, THE GREAT UNKNOWN. / No. 333 THE LOVE OF A BOXER. / CHAPTER I. / IN THE BOXING-ARENA OF 'BLACK JIMMY'."
Matull-cum-von Blankensee 之 'LORD LISTER GENAAMD RAFFLES / DE GROOTE ONBEKENDE' 的series-prelude 的' gentleman-thief-dime-novel-genre 的Dutch-original-eigen 的 represent of 'gentleman-thief-dime-novel-English-1860-1920' 的荷兰-cum-德国-cum-作家 三联峰 innov. innov 70 分系因 '三-author-collaboration 的gentleman-thief-dime-novel-genre 的 Dutch 移植 的represent. "LORD LISTER, CALLED RAFFLES, THE GREAT UNKNOWN. / No. 333 THE LOVE OF A BOXER. / CHAPTER I. / IN THE BOXING-ARENA OF 'BLACK JIMMY'."
„Een standbeeld," sprak Marholm met luide stem, „en daaronder in gouden letters het opschrift: Aan den genialen Raffles, van de dankbare Engelsche politie." - "'A statue,' spoke Marholm in a loud voice, 'and beneath it in golden letters the inscription: To the genius Raffles, from the grateful English police.'"
Matull-cum-von Blankensee 以 'Een standbeeld / Aan den genialen Raffles / van de dankbare Engelsche politie' 的coda-ironic-standbeeld-monument-award 的代表 of 'gentleman-thief-cum-public-enemy 的two-sides-monument 的Dutch-dime-novel-coda 的代表. ending 76 分系因 'two-sides-monument-coda-irony 的represent. --- "'A statue,' spoke Marholm in a loud voice, 'and beneath it in golden letters the inscription: To the genius Raffles, from the grateful English police.'"
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