木匠的贞妻

of a wryght i wyll you telle, of this land, that some tyme in thys land gan dwelle, and lyued by hys myster. 12 who, at work, was whether that he were yn or owte, afraid of no of erthely man hadde he no dowte,

木匠有手艺有胆气, 设下人物基线——后段领主陷害与妻子反击才有戏剧张力, plot scores 75.

e, to wete the wylle of the; 141 declares his own my loue ys so vppon the cast love for her, that me thynketh my hert wolle brest, it wolle none otherwyse be; 144

领主自陈"心欲迸裂"——以夸张独白暴露贪念, 反衬妻子沉着, cast scores 80.

farther myght he nott fare. 174 stumbles, the lord stumbyllyd as he went in hast, and pops down 40 he fell doune in to þat chaste feet through the forty fote and somedele more. 177

一句话三次停顿 + 数字边码, 配合"stumbyllyd"的头韵节奏——场面爆发感极强, pace scores 78.

Al̴l̴myghty god, maker of all_e_, My sovereigns, Saue you my sou_er_eyns in towre & hall_e_,

以全名上帝为引, 头韵 maker / saue / souereyns + 短行回环——口语化歌谣式开场, prose scores 70.

a wondyr strange gyle, 93 trapdoor in the a trapdoure rounde abowte [leaf 179, back] that no man myght come yn nor owte; middle, it was made wyth a wyle, 96

陷阱门以 rounde abowte 暗设机关——中世纪工坊里物质性复仇装置, world scores 72.

while his wife is all the whyle thy wyfe ys stable true, the chaplett wolle hold hewe; 60

"妻忠则桂冠永固"——钩子不在情节而在格言, hook scores 74.

The Carpenter gets a shirt with his wife, which is never to want washing unless one of them is unfaithful.

边注用英文道德命题——以"衬衣永不污"为贞的物化象征, 反向运作出"污衣=失贞"的可视化隐喻, innov scores 77.

tho that doo her husbondys rygħt, faithful wives pray we to ih_es_u full of myght, that feyre mott hem byfalle, 651

拉丁祈祷 ih_es_u(Jesus) + 古英语 feyre mott hem byfalle——贞妻以宗教祝祷封圣, ending scores 79.