亚瑟王简述

He let make [th]e Rou_n_de table: 44 round table, and why [th]_a_t he maked hyt [th]us, [th]is was [th]e resou_n_ y-wyss,-that all at it

圆桌的设立及其缘由——"no man schulde sytt aboue other"——是整篇情节核心动机, plot 靠这桩制度性事件撑起, scores 72.

[Th]e day Was sett (:) to-geder [th]ey go: fayr hyt was to byholde in suche two kny[gh]ghte[gh] bolde:

群像以骑马赴会(波莫里亚王 / 苏格兰王)与比武写就, 两人对冲"bolde"的视觉感凝于一句, cast scores 78.

Arthour fow[gh]t wy[th] [th]at wyght; he had almost ylost hys myght: wy[th] muche peyne, [th]ru[gh] goddez grace he kills the he sclowh [th]e geant in [th]at place,

押 aabb 头韵, 一对句讲一场战, 短促回环——典型中英语韵文节奏, pace scores 70.

Herkene[th], [th]at loue[th] hono_ur_, [fol. 42_b_] of kyng arthour & hys labo_ur_; how arthur and furst how he was bygete,

起句用祈使式 "Herkene[th]" 拉听众, 头韵 hono_ur_/labo_ur_/bygete 押 u-音——典型吟唱开头, prose scores 65.

For [th]ere was Vrweyn [th]e kynge there, Of scottes at [th]at dynynge, Stater [th]e kyng of south wales,

苏格兰王、威尔士南王、北境诸王同席——圆桌宴会的世界观即"全不列颠王列", world scores 75.

[Th]er was no word y-spoke, But eche hadde other by [th]e [th]rote;

两行写尽"无一句, 各扼其喉"的爆裂场面——hook 不靠悬念而靠落差, scores 76.

[Th]at no man schulde sytt aboue other, might be equal. ne haue indignaciou_n_ of hys bro[th]_er_;

"不得坐于上首 / 不得恼怒其兄"——平等原则以否定式定义, 简洁且具乌托邦制度感, innov scores 68.

Hic iacet Arthurus rex quonda_m_ rex que futur_us_.

"昔为王, 将为王"——拉丁双语墓铭, 把亚瑟从历史抛回神话, ending scores 74.