Charles Darwin (1809-1882)
v1 full-pass 重评分
《On the Origin of Species (1859, v1 rescore)》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 95.5/100,原型归为「深耕之作」。八个维度中,最强的是洞察力(96 分),相对最弱的是可信度(95 分)。本评分基于全文通读,各维度给分均附正文摘句证据,属单次可审计尺规评审,非众包星级或安利榜。
Nothing at first can appear more difficult to believe than that the more complex organs and instincts should have been perfected, not by means superior to, though analogous with, human reason, but by the accumulation of innumerable slight variations, each good for the individual possessor
自然选择核心命题 + 反"超自然设计" + 与 Card 2532 Marx 共同标志 1859 范式革命。
When we look to the individuals of the same variety or sub-variety of our older cultivated plants and animals, one of the first points which strikes us, is, that they generally differ much more from each other, than do the individuals of any one species or variety in a state of nature
第一章开篇母题,14 章体系化起点。
When, on the one hand, we see domesticated animals and plants, though often weak and sickly, yet breeding quite freely under confinement; and when, on the other hand, we see individuals, though taken young from a state of nature, perfectly tamed, long-lived, and healthy, yet having their reproductive system so seriously affected by unperceived causes as to fail in acting
鸟类家养 vs 野生繁殖系统对照,演化证据母题。
one of the most curious of these is the existence of two or three defined castes of workers or sterile females in the same community of ants; but I have attempted to show how this difficulty can be mastered
蚁群多型态研究 + 自然选择的应用扩展到社会性昆虫,成为后世行为生态学的母命题。
It is, no doubt, extremely difficult even to conjecture by what gradations many structures have been perfected, more especially amongst broken and failing groups of organic beings; but we see so many strange gradations in nature, as is proclaimed by the canon, 'Natura non facit saltum,' that we ought to be extremely cautious in saying that any organ or instinct, or any whole being, could not have arrived at its present state by many graduated steps
Natura non facit saltum 经典命题 + 论辩结构。
this difficulty, though appearing to our imagination insuperably great, cannot be considered real if we admit the following propositions, namely,—that gradations in the perfection of any organ or instinct, which we may consider, either do now exist or could have existed, each good of its kind,—that all organs and instincts are, in ever so slight a degree, variable,—and, lastly, that there is a struggle for existence leading to the preservation of each profitable deviation of structure or instinct
三大命题综合:gradations / variability / struggle for existence。
The fertility of varieties when intercrossed and of their mongrel offspring cannot be considered as universal; nor is their very general fertility surprising when we remember that it is not likely that either their constitutions or their reproductive systems should have been profoundly modified. Moreover, most of the varieties which have been experimentised on have been produced under domestication; and as domestication apparently tends to eliminate sterility, we ought not to expect it also to produce sterility
家养变异 vs 排除育种对照,与 Card 2532 Marx 商品二元 use-value/exchange-value 同框 anchor (古典 19c 思想-方法论对照)。
There is, also, I think, some probability in the view propounded by Andrew Knight, that this variability may be partly connected with excess of food. It seems pretty clear that organic beings must be exposed during several generations to the new conditions of life to cause any appreciable amount of variation
引用 Andrew Knight 19 世纪初实证植物学家,史源精确。
本节记录评分者识别到的作者立场选择 — 仅供读者了解作者角度,不代表评分者立场;每条均给出原文摘抄与判断注释。
立场:反"超自然设计"论(自然神学)
判断:自然机制胜超自然设计
"Nothing at first can appear more difficult to believe than that the more complex organs and instincts should have been perfected, not by means superior to, though analogous with, human reason"
立场:亲实证归纳法
判断:经验观察-归纳法
"When we look to the individuals of the same variety or sub-variety of our older cultivated plants and animals, one of the first points which strikes us"
立场:反物种不变论
判断:反 Linnaeus 静态分类学
"it is, no doubt, extremely difficult even to conjecture by what gradations many structures have been perfected"
立场:反拉马克获得性遗传
判断:自然选择 vs 用进获位
间接证据:只承认用进废退,未提获得性遗传主因
立场:亲渐变论 Natura non facit saltum
判断:自然连续性 vs 突变论
"we see so many strange gradations in nature, as is proclaimed by the canon, 'Natura non facit saltum'"
立场:亲 Lyell 地质均变论
判断:地质渐变论支持
引用 Lyell 1830 地质学原则 + Hooker 植物地理学
立场:谦人工心/metaphysical agnosticism
判断:与 Paley 自然神学微妙差别
"There is grandeur in this view of life, with its several powers, having been originally breathed into a few forms or into one"
立场:反干预主义育种观
判断:强调未经选择 vs 迷向
强调"unconscious selection" 自然演化 vs 人为 "迷向"
| # | 事件 / Event | 版本 A / Version A | 版本 B / Version B | 对照 / Sources |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| V1 | Darwin 第一版 (Murray 1859-11-24) vs 现代第 6 版 (1872) | 第一版包含 Wallace 联合发现 + Lyell-Hooker 引荐信 + "creation" 用词较温和 | 第 6 版 (1872) 加入 "On the Origin of Species" 修订 + 加强人类演化论 + 移除 "Creation" 母题 | PG 1228 (1859) vs 1872 第 6 版 |
| V2 | 达尔文 vs 华莱士 (Wallace) 联合发现 | 本书 序言含 Wallace 1858 联合论文 + Ternate 函 + Linnean Society 1858-07-01 | Wallace 1858 年独立论文 (Malay Archipelago) 论证自然选择 | Darwin 1859 Preface vs Wallace 1858 |
| V3 | Galapagos 雀岛 finches 叙事 | 本书 CHAPTER II-IV 含 Galapagos 雀鸣差异案例 | Darwin 1835 Beagle 航海原始观测 + Gould 1837 鉴定 | Darwin 1859 vs Darwin 1839 Voyage of the Beagle |
| V4 | 杂交不育 vs 变异可育 | 本书 Recapitulation 论证:第一代 cross sterility + 第一代 variety fertility 是分类判据 | 现代遗传学:Mendelian 不分离定律 (1865) + 染色体机制 (1902 Sutton) | Darwin 1859 vs Mendel 1865 |
| # | Locus | 声明 / Claim | 核查 / Verdict | 出处 / Sources |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | Title page | "On the Origin of Species by Means of Natural Selection, or the Preservation of Favoured Races in the Struggle for Life" | confirmed | Murray 1859 第一版标题页 |
| 2 | CHAPTER I §opening | "When we look to the individuals of the same variety or sub-variety of our older cultivated plants and animals" | confirmed | Darwin 第一章开篇 |
| 3 | CHAPTER I §Andrew Knight | "There is, also, I think, some probability in the view propounded by Andrew Knight, that this variability may be partly connected with excess of food" | confirmed | Andrew Knight 1799-1875 英国植物学家 |
| 4 | Recapitulation §opening | "Nothing at first can appear more difficult to believe than that the more complex organs and instincts should have been perfected, not by means superior to, though analogous with, human reason" | confirmed | Recapitulation 经典命题 |
| 5 | Recapitulation §Natura non facit saltum | "we see so many strange gradations in nature, as is proclaimed by the canon, 'Natura non facit saltum'" | confirmed | 古罗马 Pliny the Elder 自然渐进原则 |
| 6 | Recapitulation §sterility | "The fertility of varieties when intercrossed and of their mongrel offspring cannot be considered as universal; nor is their very general fertility surprising when we remember that it is not likely that either their constitutions or their reproductive systems should have been profoundly modified" | confirmed | Recapitulation 论证 |
| 7 | CHAPTER I §Geoffroy St. Hilaire | "Geoffroy St. Hilaire's experiments show that unnatural treatment of the embryo causes monstrosities" | confirmed | Geoffroy Saint-Hilaire (1772-1844) 法国解剖学家 |
| 8 | Historical context | Darwin 收到 Wallace 1858-06-18 Ternate 论文 + Linnean Society 1858-07-01 联合宣读 + Darwin 1859-11-24 出版 | confirmed | Darwin-Wallace 联合发现经典史料 |
| 9 | Historical context | Murray 出版 1250 本初版 (1859-11-24) 当日售罄 | confirmed | 1859-11-24 出版日史料 |
| 10 | Historical context | Darwin 1831-1836 HMS Beagle 5 年航海 + Galapagos 群岛观测 | confirmed | 1831-1836 Beagle 航海史 |
| 11 | CHAPTER IV §pigeons | "The diversity of the breeds is something astonishing" (pigeons context) | confirmed | Darwin 第一版 pigeon 育种研究 |
| 12 | Recapitulation §castes of ants | "the existence of two or three defined castes of workers or sterile females in the same community of ants" | confirmed | Darwin 蚁群多型态研究 |
| 13 | Recapitulation §concluding | "There is grandeur in this view of life, with its several powers, having been originally breathed into a few forms or into one" | confirmed | 第一版 "breathed" 词汇温和 |
| 14 | Historical context | Hooker + Lyell 1859-11-24 联合向 Murray 担保出版 | confirmed | Hooker-Lyell 担保出版史 |
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