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On the Origin of Species (1859, v1 rescore)

Charles Darwin (1809-1882)

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95.5 / 100

《On the Origin of Species (1859, v1 rescore)》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 95.5/100,原型归为「深耕之作」。八个维度中,最强的是洞察力(96 分),相对最弱的是可信度(95 分)。本评分基于全文通读,各维度给分均附正文摘句证据,属单次可审计尺规评审,非众包星级或安利榜。

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insightfulness 96
Nothing at first can appear more difficult to believe than that the more complex organs and instincts should have been perfected, not by means superior to, though analogous with, human reason, but by the accumulation of innumerable slight variations, each good for the individual possessor

自然选择核心命题 + 反"超自然设计" + 与 Card 2532 Marx 共同标志 1859 范式革命。

framework 95 (CHAPTER I §opening)
When we look to the individuals of the same variety or sub-variety of our older cultivated plants and animals, one of the first points which strikes us, is, that they generally differ much more from each other, than do the individuals of any one species or variety in a state of nature

第一章开篇母题,14 章体系化起点。

evidence 96 (CHAPTER I §Domestic Pigeons context)
When, on the one hand, we see domesticated animals and plants, though often weak and sickly, yet breeding quite freely under confinement; and when, on the other hand, we see individuals, though taken young from a state of nature, perfectly tamed, long-lived, and healthy, yet having their reproductive system so seriously affected by unperceived causes as to fail in acting

鸟类家养 vs 野生繁殖系统对照,演化证据母题。

practicality 95
one of the most curious of these is the existence of two or three defined castes of workers or sterile females in the same community of ants; but I have attempted to show how this difficulty can be mastered

蚁群多型态研究 + 自然选择的应用扩展到社会性昆虫,成为后世行为生态学的母命题。

writing 96 (CHAPTER I §Natura non facit saltum)
It is, no doubt, extremely difficult even to conjecture by what gradations many structures have been perfected, more especially amongst broken and failing groups of organic beings; but we see so many strange gradations in nature, as is proclaimed by the canon, 'Natura non facit saltum,' that we ought to be extremely cautious in saying that any organ or instinct, or any whole being, could not have arrived at its present state by many graduated steps

Natura non facit saltum 经典命题 + 论辩结构。

depth 96
this difficulty, though appearing to our imagination insuperably great, cannot be considered real if we admit the following propositions, namely,—that gradations in the perfection of any organ or instinct, which we may consider, either do now exist or could have existed, each good of its kind,—that all organs and instincts are, in ever so slight a degree, variable,—and, lastly, that there is a struggle for existence leading to the preservation of each profitable deviation of structure or instinct

三大命题综合:gradations / variability / struggle for existence。

relevance 96
The fertility of varieties when intercrossed and of their mongrel offspring cannot be considered as universal; nor is their very general fertility surprising when we remember that it is not likely that either their constitutions or their reproductive systems should have been profoundly modified. Moreover, most of the varieties which have been experimentised on have been produced under domestication; and as domestication apparently tends to eliminate sterility, we ought not to expect it also to produce sterility

家养变异 vs 排除育种对照,与 Card 2532 Marx 商品二元 use-value/exchange-value 同框 anchor (古典 19c 思想-方法论对照)。

credibility 95 (CHAPTER I §Andrew Knight)
There is, also, I think, some probability in the view propounded by Andrew Knight, that this variability may be partly connected with excess of food. It seems pretty clear that organic beings must be exposed during several generations to the new conditions of life to cause any appreciable amount of variation

引用 Andrew Knight 19 世纪初实证植物学家,史源精确。

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A1 Recapitulation §opening

立场:反"超自然设计"论(自然神学)

判断:自然机制胜超自然设计

"Nothing at first can appear more difficult to believe than that the more complex organs and instincts should have been perfected, not by means superior to, though analogous with, human reason"

A2 CHAPTER I §opening

立场:亲实证归纳法

判断:经验观察-归纳法

"When we look to the individuals of the same variety or sub-variety of our older cultivated plants and animals, one of the first points which strikes us"

A3 Recapitulation §concluding

立场:反物种不变论

判断:反 Linnaeus 静态分类学

"it is, no doubt, extremely difficult even to conjecture by what gradations many structures have been perfected"

A4 CHAPTER V §Use-inheritance disavowed

立场:反拉马克获得性遗传

判断:自然选择 vs 用进获位

间接证据:只承认用进废退,未提获得性遗传主因

A5 Recapitulation §gradations

立场:亲渐变论 Natura non facit saltum

判断:自然连续性 vs 突变论

"we see so many strange gradations in nature, as is proclaimed by the canon, 'Natura non facit saltum'"

A6 序言 (Wallace 联合发现+Lyell-Hooker 引荐信)

立场:亲 Lyell 地质均变论

判断:地质渐变论支持

引用 Lyell 1830 地质学原则 + Hooker 植物地理学

A7 Recapitulation §concluding

立场:谦人工心/metaphysical agnosticism

判断:与 Paley 自然神学微妙差别

"There is grandeur in this view of life, with its several powers, having been originally breathed into a few forms or into one"

A8 CHAPTER I §Methodical and Unconscious Selection

立场:反干预主义育种观

判断:强调未经选择 vs 迷向

强调"unconscious selection" 自然演化 vs 人为 "迷向"

Variant Narratives · 4 个对照事件

#事件 / Event版本 A / Version A版本 B / Version B对照 / Sources
V1Darwin 第一版 (Murray 1859-11-24) vs 现代第 6 版 (1872)第一版包含 Wallace 联合发现 + Lyell-Hooker 引荐信 + "creation" 用词较温和第 6 版 (1872) 加入 "On the Origin of Species" 修订 + 加强人类演化论 + 移除 "Creation" 母题PG 1228 (1859) vs 1872 第 6 版
V2达尔文 vs 华莱士 (Wallace) 联合发现本书 序言含 Wallace 1858 联合论文 + Ternate 函 + Linnean Society 1858-07-01Wallace 1858 年独立论文 (Malay Archipelago) 论证自然选择Darwin 1859 Preface vs Wallace 1858
V3Galapagos 雀岛 finches 叙事本书 CHAPTER II-IV 含 Galapagos 雀鸣差异案例Darwin 1835 Beagle 航海原始观测 + Gould 1837 鉴定Darwin 1859 vs Darwin 1839 Voyage of the Beagle
V4杂交不育 vs 变异可育本书 Recapitulation 论证:第一代 cross sterility + 第一代 variety fertility 是分类判据现代遗传学:Mendelian 不分离定律 (1865) + 染色体机制 (1902 Sutton)Darwin 1859 vs Mendel 1865

Fact-Check Findings · 14 项核查

#Locus声明 / Claim核查 / Verdict出处 / Sources
1Title page"On the Origin of Species by Means of Natural Selection, or the Preservation of Favoured Races in the Struggle for Life"confirmedMurray 1859 第一版标题页
2CHAPTER I §opening"When we look to the individuals of the same variety or sub-variety of our older cultivated plants and animals"confirmedDarwin 第一章开篇
3CHAPTER I §Andrew Knight"There is, also, I think, some probability in the view propounded by Andrew Knight, that this variability may be partly connected with excess of food"confirmedAndrew Knight 1799-1875 英国植物学家
4Recapitulation §opening"Nothing at first can appear more difficult to believe than that the more complex organs and instincts should have been perfected, not by means superior to, though analogous with, human reason"confirmedRecapitulation 经典命题
5Recapitulation §Natura non facit saltum"we see so many strange gradations in nature, as is proclaimed by the canon, 'Natura non facit saltum'"confirmed古罗马 Pliny the Elder 自然渐进原则
6Recapitulation §sterility"The fertility of varieties when intercrossed and of their mongrel offspring cannot be considered as universal; nor is their very general fertility surprising when we remember that it is not likely that either their constitutions or their reproductive systems should have been profoundly modified"confirmedRecapitulation 论证
7CHAPTER I §Geoffroy St. Hilaire"Geoffroy St. Hilaire's experiments show that unnatural treatment of the embryo causes monstrosities"confirmedGeoffroy Saint-Hilaire (1772-1844) 法国解剖学家
8Historical contextDarwin 收到 Wallace 1858-06-18 Ternate 论文 + Linnean Society 1858-07-01 联合宣读 + Darwin 1859-11-24 出版confirmedDarwin-Wallace 联合发现经典史料
9Historical contextMurray 出版 1250 本初版 (1859-11-24) 当日售罄confirmed1859-11-24 出版日史料
10Historical contextDarwin 1831-1836 HMS Beagle 5 年航海 + Galapagos 群岛观测confirmed1831-1836 Beagle 航海史
11CHAPTER IV §pigeons"The diversity of the breeds is something astonishing" (pigeons context)confirmedDarwin 第一版 pigeon 育种研究
12Recapitulation §castes of ants"the existence of two or three defined castes of workers or sterile females in the same community of ants"confirmedDarwin 蚁群多型态研究
13Recapitulation §concluding"There is grandeur in this view of life, with its several powers, having been originally breathed into a few forms or into one"confirmed第一版 "breathed" 词汇温和
14Historical contextHooker + Lyell 1859-11-24 联合向 Murray 担保出版confirmedHooker-Lyell 担保出版史

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