(anon.) / ed. James A. Harrison + Robert Sharp (Harrison & Sharp, 4th ed. 1894, Heyne-Schücking base)
《I. Beowulf: an Anglo-Saxon poem. II. The fight at Finnsburh: a fragment.》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 92.0/100,原型归为「群像长卷」。八个维度中,最强的是世界观(96 分),相对最弱的是节奏(89 分)。本评分基于样本开窗,各维度给分均附正文摘句证据,属单次可审计尺规评审,非众包星级或安利榜。
四段抽读 (HEAD line 494-555 第 II 章 'THE HALL HEOROT' Scyldinga 王朝+Heorot 鹿角堂之建 / MID line 3260-3334 XXXVII 章 'BĒOWULF WOUNDED TO DEATH' 龙伤 + 末言 / LATE line 3742-3790 XLIII 章 'BĒOWULF'S FUNERAL PYRE' 火葬 + Geáta leóde 评语 / TAIL line 3796-3841 'APPENDIX: THE ATTACK IN FINNSBURG' Hnæf 之战残篇), 覆盖 Beowulf 3182 行 + Finnsburgh 残篇四段;每段引古英语原文 + 引文出处;原文 20372 行 / 959k chars, 长篇仅抽 4 段。
«scōp him Heort naman, / sē þe his wordes geweald wīde hæfde. / Hē bēot ne ālēh, bēagas dǣlde, / sinc æt symle. Sele hlīfade / hēah and horn-gēap: heaðo-wylma bād, / lāðan līges; ne wæs hit lenge þā gēn / þæt se ecg-hete āðum-swerian / æfter wæl-nīðe wæcnan scolde.»
«Swā begnornodon Gēata lēode / hlāfordes hryre, heorð-genēatas, / cwǣdon þæt hē wǣre woruld-cyning / mannum mildust and mon-þwǣrust, / lēodum līðost and lof-geornost.»
Heorot 鹿角堂之建(开篇)+ Beowulf 火葬(末段) 形成"建堂-立碑" 二阶框架, plot 给 90。
«Þǣm fēower bearn forð-gerīmed / in worold wōcun, weoroda rǣswan, / Heorogār and Hrōðgār and Hālga til; / hȳrde ic, þat Elan cwēn Ongenþēowes wæs / Heaðoscilfinges heals-gebedde.»
«Þā tō dura ēodon drihtlīce cempan, / Sigeferð and Eaha, hyra sweord getugon, / and æt ōðrum durum Ordlāf and Gūðlāf, / and Hengest sylf; hwearf him on lāste.»
4 子(Heorogār/Hrōðgār/Hālga/Elan) 立 Scyldingas 4 王 + 4 门(Sigeferð/Eaha/Ordlāf/Gūðlāf) 立 Finnesburh 4 守, cast 给 93。
«Swā þā driht-guman drēamum lifdon / ēadiglīce, oð þæt ān ongan / fyrene fremman, fēond on helle: / wæs se grimma gæst Grendel hāten, / mǣre mearc-stapa, sē þe mōras hēold, / fen and fæsten; fīfel-cynnes eard / won-sǣlig wer weardode hwīle, / siððan him scyppend forscrifen hæfde. / In Caines cynne þone cwealm gewræc,»
«Þā wæs þēod-sceaða þriddan sīðe, / frēcne fȳr-draca fǣhða gemyndig, / rǣsde on þone rōfan, þā him rūm āgeald, / hāt and heaðo-grim, heals ealne ymbefēng / biteran bānum; hē geblōdegod wearð / sāwul-drīore; swāt ȳðum wēoll.»
开篇 9 行慢节奏立 Grendel 之"该隐之裔"(In Caines cynne) + 中段 5 行快节奏立"龙之咬伤", pace 给 89。
«"Nū ic suna mīnum syllan wolde / "gūð-gewǣdu, þǣr mē gifeðe swā / "ǣnig yrfe-weard æfter wurde, / "līce gelenge. Ic þās lēode hēold / "fīftig wintra: næs se folc-cyning / "ymbe-sittendra ǣnig þāra, / "þē mec gūð-winum grētan dorste, / "egesan þēon. Ic on earde bād / "mǣl-gesceafta, hēold mīn tela, / "ne sōhte searo-nīðas, nē mē swōr fela / "āða on unriht. Ic þæs ealles mæg, / "feorh-bennum sēoc, gefēan habban:»
"suna mīnum syllan wolde / gūð-gewǣdu"(给儿之武装)+ "fīftig wintra"(五十年) + "feorh-bennum sēoc / gefēan habban"(重伤而乐) 头韵 (suna/syllan/sōhte/swor/seoc) 处处见, prose 给 94。
«þone yldo bearn ǣfre gefrūnon, / and þǣr on innan eall gedǣlan / geongum and ealdum, swylc him god sealde, / būton folc-scare and feorum gumena. / Þā ic wīde gefrægn weorc gebannan / manigre mǣgðe geond þisne middan-geard, / folc-stede frætwan. Him on fyrste gelomp / ǣdre mid yldum, þæt hit wearð eal gearo,»
«Ne gefrægn ic nǣfre wurðlīcor æt wera hilde / sixtig sige-beorna sēl gebǣran, / ne nǣfre swānas swētne medo sēl forgyldan, / þonne Hnæfe guldon his hæg-stealdas. / Hig fuhton fīf dagas, swā hyra nān ne fēol / driht-gesīða, ac hig þā duru hēoldon. / Þā gewāt him wund hæleð on wæg gangan, / sǣde þæt his byrne ābrocen wǣre,»
Heorot 鹿角堂 ("hēah and horn-gēap") + Finnesburh 城堡 ("Buruh-þelu dynede") 立 5-8 世纪北日耳曼英雄世界, 异教 + 基督教混融 (Caines cynne) world 给 96。
«Þā wæs on burgum Bēowulf Scyldinga, / lēof lēod-cyning, longe þrāge / folcum gefrǣge (fæder ellor hwearf, / aldor of earde), oð þæt him eft onwōc / hēah Healfdene; hēold þenden lifde,»
«Hleoðrode þā heaðo-geong cyning: / "Ne þis ne dagað ēastan, ne hēr draca ne flēogeð, / "ne hēr þisse healle hornas ne byrnað, / "ac fēr forð berað fugelas singað, / "gylleð grǣg-hama, gūð-wudu hlynneð, / "scyld scefte oncwyð. Nū scȳneð þes mōna»
第 II 章开篇立"Beowulf Scyldinga 王朝" 元钩 + Finnesburgh 残篇开篇"nea þis ne dagað ēastan"(东方未亮) 立战事元钩, hook 给 92。
«Þā gīt Gārulf Gūðere styrode, / þæt hīe swā frēolīc feorh forman sīðe / tō þǣre healle durum hyrsta ne bǣran, / nū hyt nīða heard ānyʒman wolde: / ac hē frægn ofer eal undearninga, / dēor-mōd hæleð, hwā þā duru hēolde.»
«"forþām mē wītan ne þearf waldend fīra / "morðor-bealo māga, þonne mīn sceaceð / "līf of līce. Nū þū lungre / "geong, hord scēawian under hārne stān, / "Wīglāf lēofa, nū se wyrm ligeð, / "swefeð sāre wund, since berēafod. / "Bīo nū on ofoste, þæt ic ǣr-welan, / "gold-ǣht ongite, gearo scēawige / "swegle searo-gimmas, þæt ic þȳ sēft mǣge / "æfter māððum-welan mīn ālǣtan / "līf and lēod-scipe, þone ic longe hēold.»
古英语-英雄史诗源头代表; Bēowulf 末言"ic þās lēode hēold / fīftig wintra"(守民五十年)+ "mīn ālǣtan / līf and lēod-scipe"(舍生与王业) 头韵排比, innov 给 94。
«Him þā gegiredan Gēata lēode / ād on eorðan un-wāclīcne, / helmum behongen, hilde-bordum, / beorhtum byrnum, swā hē bēna wæs; / ālegdon þā tō-middes mǣrne þēoden / hæleð hīofende, hlāford lēofne. / Ongunnon þā on beorge bǣl-fȳra mǣst / wīgend weccan: wudu-rēc āstāh / sweart ofer swioðole, swōgende lēg, / wōpe bewunden (wind-blond gelæg)»
«Swā begnornodon Gēata lēode / hlāfordes hryre, heorð-genēatas, / cwǣdon þæt hē wǣre woruld-cyning / mannum mildust and mon-þwǣrust, / lēodum līðost and lof-geornost.»
火葬 + 12 王环绕堆墓 + "woruld-cyning / mannum mildust"评语作收, 古英语英雄史诗经典 ending, ending 给 90。
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