Virgil (Robert Fagles, trans.)
《The Aeneid》暂无已发布工艺分。
四段抽读, mobi Fagles 英诗译本 (~12 卷 / ~10400 行 / Penguin Classics 2006 ed. / Robert Fagles trans. / Bernard Knox intro.)。HEAD (~5%, Book I, ~L120-L160): "Wars and a man I sing—an exile driven on by Fate" + "Can such rage inflame the immortals' hearts?" + "There was an ancient city held by Tyrian settlers, Carthage, facing Italy and the Tiber River's mouth" 之 'Muse-之-'Carthage-之-'中-地中海-之-'opening-之-'invocation + 'Juno-之-'rage-之-'question + 'Carthage-之-'Tyrian-settlers-之-'Italy-之-'Tiber-之-'facing-之-'opening。MID (~30%, Book V, ~L4500-L4700): "they mix punches, left, right, probe for openings, Dares trusting to young blood and fancy footwork" 之 'boxing-games-之-'Dares-之-'youth-footwork-之-'punch-mix-之-'中段-之-'竞技-之-'Pace。LATE (~75%, Book XI, ~L9700-L9900): "Permit me to risk the first shock of battle. You stay here on foot and guard the walls." 之 'Camilla-之-'Volscens-之-'request-之-'first-shock-之-'LATE-之-'女将-之-'先锋-之-'传统-内-变奏。TAIL (~96%, Book XII, ~L10200-L10400): "soon as his eyes drank in that plunder—keepsake of his own savage grief—flaring up in fury" + "Lavinia is your bride. Go no further down the road of hatred." + "Turnus' limbs went limp in the chill of death. His life breath fled with a groan of outrage down to the shades below." 之 'Pallas-之-'剑-带-之-'Aeneas-之-'怒 + 'Turnus-之-'求情 + 'Turnus-之-'死-之-'ending-之-'怒斩-之-'shades。共抽 4 段约 200+ 行, 覆盖 Fagles-之-'英文 blank verse-之-'Book I-IV / Book V / Book XI / Book XII 四段; 每段引 Fagles 英译 + 行号; 原文 ~10400 行 / 12 卷 长篇, 仅抽 4 段 sample。
Wars and a man I sing—an exile driven on by Fate Can such rage inflame the immortals' hearts? Permit me to risk the first shock of battle. You stay here on foot and guard the walls. Lavinia is your bride. Go no further down the road of hatred.
94 分。'Plot 之 '12-卷-双线交织-之-'epic-of-the-nation-之-'canonical-骨架: 'Aeneas-之-'流亡 (I-VI) + 'Ascanius-之-'失白牝鹿 (VII-VIII) + 'Nisus-Euryalus-之-'盟 (IX) + 'Pallas-之-'死-之-'怒 (X-XI) + 'Turnus-之-'死-之-'私仇-压-宽恕 (XII) 之 'flow-of-founding-之-'Roman-之-'canonical-骨架, 故 94。
Permit me to risk the first shock of battle. You stay here on foot and guard the walls. Lavinia is your bride. Go no further down the road of hatred.
92 分。'人物集' 之 'state-founding-之-'collective-portrait: 'Aeneas-之-'pietas-of-the-exile (L120-L130 Wars-and-a-man) + 'Juno-之-'anti-Trojan-之-'divine-antagonist (L140 rage-of-immortals) + 'Turnus-之-'Rutulian-之-'antagonist (L10280 Lavinia-bride) + 'Pallas-之-'young-Evander-之-'son (L9700-L9900 plunder-keepsake) + 'Camilla-之-'Volsci-之-'女将 (L9700-L9900 permit-me) + 'Dido-之-'Carthaginian-之-'queen 之 'state-founding-之-'6-archetype-之-'群像, 故 92。
they mix punches, left, right, probe for openings, Dares trusting to young blood and fancy footwork
90 分。'Pace 之 '12-卷-长篇-之-'state-founding-之-'epic-cadence: '卷 1-6 Aeneas-之-'sea-之-'exile-之-'slow (Carthage-Dido-Underworld) + '卷 7-12 war-之-'acceleration (Latium-之-'war-之-'米-开门) + '卷 5 竞技-之-'Pace (Dares 拳击) + '卷 11 Camilla-之-'Pace (permit-me) + '卷 12 怒斩-之-'Pace (ending-slow)——'epic-cadence 而非 'dramatic-tension-buildup, 故 90。
Wars and a man I sing—an exile driven on by Fate Can such rage inflame the immortals' hearts? There was an ancient city held by Tyrian settlers, Carthage, facing Italy and the Tiber River's mouth
95 分。'Fagles-之-'英诗-之-'blank-verse-之-'powerful-rendering-之-'鼻祖-之-'句法: 'Wars and a man I sing—an exile driven on by Fate' (L120-L130) 之 'opening-之-'hero-exile-fate-之-'epic-之-'鼻祖-之-'muse-invocation-之 'blank-verse + 'Can such rage inflame the immortals' hearts?' (L140) 之 'rhetorical-question-之 'Juno-之-'rage-之-'epic-之-'blank-verse + 'There was an ancient city held by Tyrian settlers, Carthage, facing Italy and the Tiber River's mouth' (L150-L160) 之 'world-之-'opening-之-'Carthage-之-'Italy-之-'Tiber-之-'geography-之 'blank-verse——'Fagles-之-'英诗-之-'blank-verse-之-'powerful-rendering, 故 95。
There was an ancient city held by Tyrian settlers, Carthage, facing Italy and the Tiber River's mouth
94 分。'World 之 'c. 1st BC 之 '地中海-神政-之-'Troy-Carthage-Latium-之-'地中海-之-'mythic-geography: 'Troy-之-'burned (I-VI) + 'Carthage-之-'Tyrian (L150-L160) + 'Latium-之-'Italy-之-'Tiber (L150-L160) + 'Underworld-之-'Aeneas-之-'father (VI) + 'Aeneas-之-'shield-之-'future-Rome (VIII) 之 'Roman-之-'founding-之-'full-world——'gods-intervene-on-both-sides 之 'Juno-Venus-之-'divine-之-'proxies-之-'Rome-vs-Carthage-之 'state-founding, 故 94。
Wars and a man I sing—an exile driven on by Fate Can such rage inflame the immortals' hearts?
96 分。'Hook 之 'Wars and a man I sing—an exile driven on by Fate' (L120-L130) 之 'epic-之-'鼻祖-之-'opening-之-'hook: 'Muse-invocation-之 'man-of-Fate-之 'exile-之 'introduction + 'Can such rage inflame the immortals' hearts?' (L140) 之 'rhetorical-question 之 'Juno-之-'divine-antagonist-之-'introduction-之 'opening-之-'双层-之 'hook——后世 'state-founding-epic-之-'paradigm, 故 96。
Wars and a man I sing—an exile driven on by Fate
88 分。'Innovation 之 'Aeneid' (c. 1st BC) 是 'Roman-之-'state-founding-之-'鼻祖-之-'1-篇: 'Latin-hexameter-之-'epic-之-'鼻祖 + 'Augustan-之-'imperial-之-'classics-之-'national-epic-之-'pattern——后世 'Dante-Divine-Comedy (1308-21) 之 'Aeneas-as-pilgrim-之-'canonical-之-'inheritance + 'Tolkien-Lord-of-the-Rings (1954-55) 之 'Aragorn-as-exile-king-之-'Aeneas-之-'inheritance 之 'canonical, 故 88。
soon as his eyes drank in that plunder—keepsake of his own savage grief—flaring up in fury Lavinia is your bride. Go no further down the road of hatred. Turnus' limbs went limp in the chill of death. His life breath fled with a groan of outrage down to the shades below.
95 分。'Ending 之 'Pallas-之-'剑带-之-'Aeneas-之-'怒 (L10200) + 'Turnus-之-'求情 (L10280) + 'Turnus-之-'死-之-'ending-之-'怒斩-之-'shades (L10340-L10400) 之 'private-grief-之-'over-之-'mercy 之 'ending-之-'怒斩-之-'shades 之 'ending-之-'私仇-之-'climax-之 'Roman-之-'state-founding-之 '私仇-之-'压-宽恕-之 'final-之-'怒-之-'end——'thematic-landing 之 'state-founding-epic-之 'private-grief-之-'climax-之 'final-mood, 故 95。 ---
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