Stephen King
《The Green Mile》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 93.9/100,原型归为「群像长卷」。八个维度中,最强的是人物(95 分),相对最弱的是创新(93 分)。本评分基于样本开窗,各维度给分均附正文摘句证据,属单次可审计尺规评审,非众包星级或安利榜。
"Local mobi; open/mid/late/end + full.txt (John Coffey, Mr Jingles, I'm tired, electric chair)."
John Coffey took the play out of our hands. He pushed into the entry and past Moores
他夺过行动权,故情节 94。
I'm tired of all the times I've wanted to help and couldn't. I'm tired of bein in the dark. Mostly it's the pain.
疲倦自白立 Coffey,故人物 95。
those last forty yards to the electric chair, knowing you were going to die there?
四十码倒计时,故节奏 93。
healing is never about the healed or the healer, but about God's will.
治愈被改写成神意义务,故文笔 94。
hopping up the middle of the Green Mile… ‘Hey, mouse!’
死刑通道日常化,故世界 93。
had take Mr. Jingles, the mouse, out of the cigar box he slept in.
老鼠安抚死囚即钩,故钩子 94。
Luke Coffey became John Coffey (with a tip of the chapeau to William Faulkner
基督身位显式嫁接,故创新 93。
There's too much. If I could end it, I would. But I cain't.
痛无法结束,故结局 95。
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