Terry Pratchett
《Johnny and the Dead》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 91.1/100,原型归为「均衡佳作」。八个维度中,最强的是钩子(92 分),相对最弱的是世界观(90 分)。本评分基于样本开窗,各维度给分均附正文摘句证据,属单次可审计尺规评审,非众包星级或安利榜。
"Local mobi; open/mid/late/end + full.txt (cemetery closing, famous dead, heaven/hell difference)."
the cemetery is going to be closed. Going to be built on.
开发威胁即主线,故情节 91。
John Maxwell! We must talk to you!
死人议长点名,故人物 91。
And the dead faded. Again there was the sensation of traveling
来去切换推节拍,故节奏 91。
wonderful. Which wasn’t the same as nice. It wasn’t even the same as good. But it was full of…stuff.
拆开美好词,故文笔 91。
There’s a cemetery in London with Karl Marx in it. It’s famous for him being dead in it.
名人尸体成地标逻辑,故世界 90。
Was anyone supposed to tell us?
死者不知情即钩,故钩子 92。
talking about the difference between heaven and hell.
童口谈彼岸差,故创新 91。
Yeah… All right. What shall we do now?
接受世界后继续玩,故结局 92。
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