Orson Scott Card & Kathryn H. Kidd
《Lovelock》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 91.9/100，原型归为「群像长卷」。八个维度中，最强的是人物（93 分），相对最弱的是节奏（90 分）。本评分基于样本开窗，各维度给分均附正文摘句证据，属单次可审计尺规评审，非众包星级或安利榜。
"Local mobi; open/mid/late/end + full.txt (capuchin witness, Carol Jeanne, cage/discretion, wilderness freedom close). Mayflower trilogy #1."
I would have to keep her in a cage forever… I could never have trusted her to understand the need for discretion…
爱与囚禁同线，故情节 92。
I found myself hoping that she would hurry up and die.
自认怪物立住，故人物 93。
Being in Mayflower village would be almost like high school again.
殖民社会日常推速，故节奏 90。
I was a mere witness; she was the genius whose works and words needed to be so constantly recorded.
旁观等级一针见血，故文笔 91。
she would always be a capuchin, unenhanced and therefore incapable of true communication with me.
增强差序可信，故世界 91。
Why should she look at me, to try to understand my wordless words?
看不见的记录者即钩，故钩子 92。
I will give the command that erases the entire record, as I prepare to lead my people off to a life of freedom…
叙事者删掉自己的书，故创新 93。
…freedom in the wilderness of the new world.
见证结束于出走，故结局 93。
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