Orson Scott Card
《Earthborn》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 91.1/100，原型归为「均衡佳作」。八个维度中，最强的是结局（94 分），相对最弱的是钩子（90 分）。本评分基于样本开窗，各维度给分均附正文摘句证据，属单次可审计尺规评审，非众包星级或安利榜。
"Local mobi OCR scan; open/mid/late/end + full.txt (Keeper judgment, utter independence as punishment, Shedemei school vomit close). Homecoming vol.5 finale."
Shedemei left the great public spectacle and returned to the mundane duties of the school.
大场面让位琐务，故情节 90。
“Talk into my mind,” she said to the Oversoul. “I hate that.”
厌烦里仍有羁绊，故人物 91。
This one-day nausea had been going around the school…
用流行病节奏收史诗，故节奏 90。
I didn’t realize that utter independence was the most terrible punishment.
自由写成酷刑，故文笔 91。
“But when you speak, diggers and angels listen to you…”
三族政治仍在，故世界 92。
responsible to no one, un-commanded, uncontrolled, unexpected, free?
钩子是失去看守，故钩子 90。
When I felt the pain I was part of something; now I am part of nothing.
把神判撤走当结局引擎，故创新 91。
Menial, wearying work, and Shedemei was very good at it.
五卷收官落在擦呕吐，故结局 94。
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