Orson Scott Card
《The Lost Gate》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 90.5/100,原型归为「均衡佳作」。八个维度中,最强的是钩子(92 分),相对最弱的是文笔(89 分)。本评分基于样本开窗,各维度给分均附正文摘句证据,属单次可审计尺规评审,非众包星级或安利榜。
"Local mobi; open/mid/late/end + full.txt (gatemage ban, Gate Thief, Westil/drowther, deserves-to close). Afterword stripped."
“There” meaning Westil… the place where the Gate Thief was waiting for him… “It’s open,” said Hermia.
开门即对上贼,故情节 90。
Somewhere along in here I need to grow up into a man I can stand to live with.
自省压过炫技,故人物 90。
“Don’t worry,” said Ced. “The Gate Thief will probably eat them all before morning.” Nobody laughed.
笑场失败即加速,故节奏 91。
“You’re a gatemage,” said Leslie. “You understand everything that anybody says.”
设定说明偏直,故文笔 89。
maybe he was trying to save the drowthers, too.
关门也可能护凡人,故世界 91。
a gatemage, which the Norths were forbidden ever to have again…
禁种即钩子,故钩子 92。
That his reason for closing all the gates was real and compelling.
反派动机翻转有效,故创新 90。
A man who doesn’t just survive, but deserves to.
权力后问配得上,故结局 91。
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