Orson Scott Card
《Hart's Hope》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 92.0/100,原型归为「均衡佳作」。八个维度中,最强的是结局(94 分),相对最弱的是节奏(90 分)。本评分基于样本开窗,各维度给分均附正文摘句证据,属单次可审计尺规评审,非众包星级或安利榜。
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Orem sat on the stone floor, reached out and touched the cold bone of the Hart’s corpse.
触鹿尸即转折,故情节 91。
Queen Beauty walked near to him, reached out and took him by the ears…
女王压迫感立住,故人物 92。
O Palicrovol, with death and vengeance in your eyes, I write to you…
书信框压住血腥,故节奏 90。
He blurted out his gift in words that in themselves had little meaning to him…
祝福先于理解,故文笔 91。
Kind, the father of all, perfector of the Seven Circles…
神学地理叠血法,故世界 93。
you will withhold your blade-filled hand, and no longer seek the death of the boy…
开场即劝杀停手,故钩子 92。
Did you think this was the tale of Orem Scanthips? His tale was finished when Youth died.
读者跟着的不是真正主语,故创新 93。
In Orem’s short life he has already earned his name: Hart’s Hope. But you: come to me now, my husband…
书名落在另一人身上,故结局 94。
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