Kurt Vonnegut
《Deadeye Dick》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 91.5/100，原型归为「文笔流」。八个维度中，最强的是文笔（93 分），相对最弱的是节奏（90 分）。本评分基于样本开窗，各维度给分均附正文摘句证据，属单次可审计尺规评审，非众包星级或安利榜。
"Local mobi; open/mid/late/end + full.txt (Deadeye nickname, gun room, neutron bomb Midland City, Rudy as local Shakespeare). Promo open; engine is childhood misfire guilt + hometown erased by accidental nuke."
Perhaps the neutron bomb explosion wasn’t so accidental after all.
个人走火叠城市抹除，故情节 91。
There’s a murderer in the family, all right—but it isn’t Father. It’s me.
罪责自认立住，故人物 90。
I had been trying out a lot of new recipes…
食谱打断有效，故节奏 90。
He didn’t call me “Deadeye Dick.” Very rarely did anybody do that to my face.
绰号羞耻写准，故文笔 93。
free-fire zone… purple school bus… Nobody gets to bring his own car inside…
被征用的故乡可信，故世界 92。
fetish out of the key to the gun room…
枪室即祸根，故钩子 91。
I, Rudy Waltz, the William Shakespeare of Midland City… will now make my own gift to the future, which is a legend.
把地方史写成自我神话，故创新 92。
the restless ghost of Will Fairchild… why Will Fairchild’s ghost is likely to be seen roaming…
城市死后留下传说，故结局 93。
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