Orson Scott Card
《Ender in Exile》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 91.0/100,原型归为「均衡佳作」。八个维度中,最强的是结局(93 分),相对最弱的是钩子(89 分)。本评分基于样本开窗,各维度给分均附正文摘句证据,属单次可审计尺规评审,非众包星级或安利榜。
"Local mobi; open/mid/late/end + full.txt (Shakespeare colony, Virlomi/Achilles-son strand, Hive Queen cocoon, Speaker path). End sample is copyright — true arc is Ender governing then carrying the cocoon toward Speaker."
He put the cocoon back in its hiding place… luggage being taken down to the surface.
殖民冲突与虫后种子并进,故情节 91。
Ender and Valentine sat silently to watch Morgan read.
姐弟同盟稳,故人物 92。
I want our colony to be ready to welcome the new colonists…
到港前政治加压,故节奏 90。
I have to tell the truth—I have to admit what I was…
罪责语气准,故文笔 90。
the first colony’s name is revealed as “Shakespeare”
殖民世界立住,故世界 92。
ENDER IN EXILE
标题即处境,故钩子 89。
Since the author will be ‘Speaker for the Dead,’ this can’t be published until after you die.
把讲死者身份埋进流放,故创新 91。
As soon as the human race understood that it was a tragedy to destroy the hive queens, we had to find someone to blame… so that the rest of us could be absolved.
收在替罪与坦白,故结局 93。
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