Ray Bradbury
《The Illustrated Man》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 92.2/100，原型归为「匕首出鞘」。八个维度中，最强的是文笔（95 分），相对最弱的是人物（88 分）。本评分基于样本开窗，各维度给分均附正文摘句证据，属单次可审计尺规评审，非众包星级或安利榜。
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The stories were told; they were over and done. … The picture on his back showed the Illustrated Man himself…
框进框出完整，故情节 90（非长篇单弧）。
“You’ll be sorry you asked me to stay,” he said. “Everyone always is.”
框中人强、短篇人流转，故人物 88。
Another five minutes and then I’ll walk into the sea… / “We are home,” said Bodoni.
单篇内加速干净，故节奏 92。
I walk in the sun for hours on the hottest days, baking, and hope that my sweat’ll wash them off…
感官句压过说教，故文笔 95。
THE SUN DOME … Red Mars floated near the rocket.
行星与美国路边拼贴成立，故世界 92。
“Are they still there now?” After a long while I exhaled. “Yes,” I said. “They’re still there.”
开场即强迫看见，故钩子 94。
"George, I wish you’d look at the nursery." … He was covered with Illustrations from the blue tattooed ring…
纹身放映未来 + 育儿室吃人，故创新 94。
with his fingers about my neck, choking me to death. … I ran down the road in the moonlight.
框叙事反噬叙述者，故结局 93。
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