Blue Mars

Nowhere on this world were people killing each other, nowhere were they desperate for shelter or food…

独立后长史完整，故情节 90。

Ann walked over to help her. Lifted her to her feet… “Look at the gulls!”

够用，故 89。

Mars is free now. We’re on our own. No one tells us what to do.

最长卷，故节奏 87。

dark grains of basalt, mixed with minute seashell fragments, and a variety of colorful pebbles…

仍清晰，故文笔 91。

Waves broke in swift lines on the beach… Gulls planed overhead.

蓝海世界厚，故世界观 96。

Mars is free now. We’re on our own. No one tells us what to do.

开场强，故钩子 93。

The areophany will have to be ceaseless, an eternal struggle.

乌托邦收束，故创新 92。

…she walked over the sand toward her friends, in the wind, on Mars, on Mars, on Mars, on Mars, on Mars.

叠句收束极强，故结局 95。