John Updike
《Rabbit Redux》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 90.1/100，原型归为「文笔流」。八个维度中，最强的是文笔（93 分），相对最弱的是节奏（88 分）。本评分基于样本开窗，各维度给分均附正文摘句证据，属单次可审计尺规评审，非众包星级或安利榜。
"Local mobi; sampled printers/Soyuz opening and final 'He. She. Sleeps. O.K.?'"
He finds this inward curve and slips along it, sleeps. He. She. Sleeps. O.K.?
崩解—暂归完整，故情节 89。
“Hey. Jill,” Buchanan says. “Hi Buck. Skeeter, hi.” So Skeeter is his name.
群像够用，故 90。
MEN emerge pale from the little printing plant at four sharp, ghosts for an instant…
偏沉，故节奏 88。
…soft as flight, fat's inward curve, slack, his babies from her belly.
感官细，故文笔 93。
LIEUT. COL. VLADIMIR A. SHATALOV: I am heading straight for the socket.
时代切片有效，故世界观 91。
MEN emerge pale from the little printing plant at four sharp, ghosts for an instant…
开场有效，故钩子 90。
A man and his son, Earl Angstrom and Harry, are among the printers released from work.
续写时代，故创新 89。
He. She. Sleeps. O.K.?
收束有效，故结局 91。
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