Philip Connors
《Fire Season》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 91.6/100,原型归为「世界构筑流」。八个维度中,最强的是世界观(95 分),相对最弱的是情节(88 分)。本评分基于样本开窗,各维度给分均附正文摘句证据,属单次可审计尺规评审,非众包星级或安利榜。
"mobi; reanchor Prologue past TOC; cut Acknowledgments. Four windows."
I’d talked myself into her job.
接班瞭望弧,plot 88。
I take Alice on one final hike to the north.
犬伴立人,cast 89。
marking each one by squeezing the toes on first my right foot, then my left
踱步节拍,pace 90。
If I could find the place I could find the poem. I have found the place. This is my poem.
澄明收笔,prose 94。
a couple-hundred-mile stretch of their walk, from the Mexican border
边境山脊,world 95。
I thought fire lookouts had gone the way of itinerant cowboys, small-time gold prospectors
消亡钩,hook 92。
powerless to alter a thing out there in the world, utterly above it all
旁观伦理,innov 91。
I have found the place. This is my poem.
诗与地合一,ending 94。
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