Michael Cunningham
《A Home at the End of the World》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 90.0/100，原型归为「文笔流」。八个维度中，最强的是文笔（93 分），相对最弱的是节奏（87 分）。本评分基于样本开窗，各维度给分均附正文摘句证据，属单次可审计尺规评审，非众包星级或安利榜。
"mobi; reanchor past praise/TOC to ONCE father convertible; mid bedroom care scene; late cowboy boots bracelets; end took Erich back to shore before permissions. Four windows."
Bobby announced that the minute was up, and we took Erich back to shore.
水中仪式收束，plot 88。
“Everything’s okay, sweetheart,” I said. “Just relax, I’ll take care of everything.”
照料声口立人，cast 92。
He’d taken the possibility with him into the crematorium’s fire.
丧亡节点加速，pace 87。
our father bought a convertible. Don’t ask me. I was five. He bought it and drove it home as casually as he’d brin
短句童年声口，prose 93。
I was a man in cowboy boots and black jeans. I wore ten black rubber bracelets on one wrist.
身份外观地图，world 89。
Don’t ask me. I was five.
童声甩锅开钩，hook 90。
I would not die unfulfilled because I’d been here, right here and nowhere else.
家＝地点伦理学，innov 89。
we took Erich back to shore.
托举／回岸收束，ending 92。
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