Jonathan Franzen
《Freedom》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 91.3/100,原型归为「世界构筑流」。八个维度中,最强的是世界观(94 分),相对最弱的是节奏(88 分)。本评分基于样本开窗,各维度给分均附正文摘句证据,属单次可审计尺规评审,非众包星级或安利榜。
"mobi; reanchor past TOC to news about Walter Berglund; mid phone-sex quarrel; late Nick/woman jab; end bird sanctuary gate/ceramic sign. Four windows."
He was leaving his property, instead, to be managed by a local land trust as a bird sanctuary.
土地归鸟收束主线,plot 91。
Patty frightened nobody, but she’d been a standout athlete in high school and college and possessed a jock sort of fearlessness.
Patty 立人,cast 92。
“You can only blame me for half of it.”
对话节拍推婚变,pace 88。
Then again, there had always been something not quite right about the Berglunds.
全知冷嘲句,prose 93。
Walter and Patty were the young pioneers of Ramsey Hill—the first college grads to buy a house on Barrier Street
士绅化街区地图,world 94。
The news about Walter Berglund wasn’t picked up locally—he and Patty had moved away to Washington two years earlier
丑闻回望开钩,hook 91。
I don’t see why I can’t mention Nick if you’re going to be talking about your woman all the time.
三角自由伦理并置,innov 89。
beneath a small ceramic sign with a picture of the pretty young dark-skinned girl after whom the preserve is named.
保护区反讽收束,ending 92。
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