Joseph O'Neill
《Netherland》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 90.4/100,原型归为「世界构筑流」。八个维度中,最强的是世界观(94 分),相对最弱的是节奏(87 分)。本评分基于样本开窗,各维度给分均附正文摘句证据,属单次可审计尺规评审,非众包星级或安利榜。
"mobi; reanchor past TOC to AFTERNOON BEFORE I LEFT LONDON; mid baby crawl kindness attempt; late blackout heliport panic; end Ferris/Jake Look before Acknowledgments. Four windows."
I didn’t wonder very often about what had become of a man named Chuck Ramkissoon, who’d been a friend during my final East Coast summer
Chuck 线预埋,plot 88。
decided to make another attempt at kindness, and at nine o’clock, with the baby finally drowsy in his cot, came with a full heart back to his wife to find her asleep
Hans 婚姻失败感,cast 89。
I thought about packing a bag at once and trying to escape the island on foot, or by boat, or running over to the Thirtieth Street heliport
停电恐慌加速,pace 87。
life carries a taint of aftermath. This last-mentioned word, somebody once told me, refers literally to a second mowing of grass in the same season.
余殃词源句,prose 93。
Everybody looked at the Statue of Liberty and at Ellis Island and at the Brooklyn Bridge, but finally, inevitably, everybody looked to Manhattan.
渡轮天际线地图,world 94。
AFTERNOON BEFORE I LEFT LONDON FOR NEW YORK —Rachel had flown out six weeks previously—I was in my cubicle at work, boxing up my possessions
离境午后钩,hook 90。
“You say that now,” he said. “But New York’s a very hard place to leave.”
城市难离作全书命题,innov 91。
“Look!” Jake is saying, pointing wildly. “See, Daddy?” I see, I tell him, looking from him to Rachel and again to him.
家庭目光收束,ending 91。
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