John Banville
《The Sea》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 90.8/100,原型归为「氛围沉思」。八个维度中,最强的是文笔(97 分),相对最弱的是节奏(84 分)。本评分基于样本开窗,各维度给分均附正文摘句证据,属单次可审计尺规评审,非众包星级或安利榜。
"mobi; reanchor past TOC/acclaim to gods/strange tide; mid Chloe beach regard; late drink/Bun; end walking into the sea before author bio. Four windows."
I stumbled out of the waves to find that Chloe had waited for me, on the shore, all the time that I was in the water.
童年示爱节点,plot 86。
“It was never him, with me,” she says. “You didn’t think that, did you?”
Miss V 纠偏欲望三角,cast 88。
Have I spoken already of my drinking? I drink like a fish. No, not like a fish, fishes do not drink
夜饮独白拖拍,pace 84。
They departed, the gods, on the day of the strange tide. All morning under a milky sky the waters in the bay had swelled and swelled
开篇即 Banville 声部,prose 97。
The name of the house is the Cedars, as of old. A bristling clump of those trees, monkey-brown with a tarry reek
度假屋气味地图,world 93。
I would not swim again, after that day.
禁令即钩,hook 95。
But who is it that lingers there on the strand in the half-light, by the darkening sea
旁观童年自我的叠影法,innov 90。
A nurse came out then to fetch me, and I turned and followed her inside, and it was as if I were walking into the sea.
丧妻门槛=回潮,ending 93。
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