Michael Ondaatje
《The English Patient》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 91.9/100，原型归为「氛围沉思」。八个维度中，最强的是文笔（96 分），相对最弱的是节奏（85 分）。本评分基于样本开窗，各维度给分均附正文摘句证据，属单次可审计尺规评审，非众包星级或安利榜。
"mobi; reanchor past TOC to Hana garden weather shift; mid Cairo lovers sunlight/Herodotus; late (default); end Kip catches fork for daughter before Acknowledgements. Four windows."
We will never love each other again. We can never see each other again.
开罗恋情断点，plot 90。
She is a woman of honour and smartness whose wild love leaves out luck, always taking risks
Hana 定格立人，cast 91。
In the few hours they have, the room has darkened to this pitch of light.
偷情时限压迫，pace 85。
She stands up in the garden where she has been working and looks into the distance. She has sensed a shift in the weather.
感官诗句开笔，prose 96。
In the apartment there is light only from the river and the desert beyond it.
尼罗／沙漠光地图，world 94。
There is another gust of wind, a buckle of pressure
天气移位开钩，hook 92。
His hand flabby over the Herodotus journal, all the tension in the rest of his body
史书夹私情方法，innov 93。
Kirpal's left hand swoops down and catches the dropped fork an inch from the floor and gently passes it into the fingers of his daughter
拆弹手变父亲手，ending 94。
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