Jonathan Franzen
《The Corrections》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 90.6/100，原型归为「氛围沉思」。八个维度中，最强的是文笔（94 分），相对最弱的是节奏（86 分）。本评分基于样本开窗，各维度给分均附正文摘句证据，属单次可审计尺规评审，非众包星级或安利榜。
"mobi; reanchor past TOC to prairie cold-front madness; mid Alfred illness/Enid; late (default); end Enid seventy-five hope before other-books blurbs. Four windows."
She was seventy-five and she was going to make some changes in her life.
纠错主题落到 Enid，plot 91。
Enid dahling, I should most appreciate some assistance at your earliest possible convenience.
病中 Alfred 立人，cast 93。
Unconfirmed reports from nerves in the small of Alfred's back…indicated that additional turd units were in the vicinity.
病体喜剧加速，pace 86。
The madness of an autumn prairie cold front coming through. You could feel it: something terrible was going to happen.
天气即命运句法，prose 94。
Three in the afternoon was a time of danger in these gerontocratic suburbs of St. Jude.
老龄郊区地图，world 90。
You could feel it: something terrible was going to happen.
预感开钩，hook 92。
the crafty turd, “I am having difficulties. I would appreciate your assistance.”
失禁意识神话化，innov 88。
she felt that nothing could kill her hope now, nothing.
希望不灭收束，ending 91。
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