Giles Foden
《Ladysmith》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 88.4/100,原型归为「钩子流」。八个维度中,最强的是钩子(92 分),相对最弱的是创新(84 分)。本评分基于样本开窗,各维度给分均附正文摘句证据,属单次可审计尺规评审,非众包星级或安利榜。
"mobi; reanchor past synopsis to Ch.One Guinness/ruby point; mid siege reporters Churchill capture; late (default); end cave matches / THE END before TOC. Four windows."
The bloody Boers have captured Winston Churchill. Something to do with an armoured train.
史实节点嵌入围城,plot 88。
Little Bella and Jane are fast asleep in a room upstairs. They keep asking about their mother
丧偶父女立人,cast 86。
after antiquarians have come to dig up the forgotten towns of Natal and discovered it, the unnumbered readers of the Daily Mail will know what a siege and bombardment was really like!
记者狂想加速压迫感,pace 87。
Just where the cheerful liquid flows over the lip of the bottle, you will see a beautiful deep colour glittering like a jewel. It is a moment in time, and it is called the ruby point.
感官隐喻开笔,prose 89。
It began with a battering ram, which the landlord's men…brought and erected outside my family's cottage in Tarbert.
爱尔兰驱逐接南非围城,world 91。
If you hold the bottle up against the light as you pour it into the glass, you will see what colour Guinness really is.
酒吧细节钩回忆,hook 92。
There are new names about, and new myths to go with them. Look at millionaires like Lipton.
围城旁论现代神话,innov 84。
We were glad to make our way outside, my children and I, following the oval gap at the mouth of the cave, as it drew the sky towards us.
洞穴出光收束,ending 90。
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