Harry Harrison
《Homeworld》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 86.8/100,原型归为「工艺扎实」。八个维度中,最强的是结局(90 分),相对最弱的是文笔(84 分)。本评分基于样本开窗,各维度给分均附正文摘句证据,属单次可审计尺规评审,非众包星级或安利榜。
"mobi; open fuel-plant / Jan Kulozik; mid garage resistance / Sara; late Irish Club bugs; end Thurgood-Smythe exile + Jan smiles (cut trailing TOC). Four windows."
If you decide to work with us, yours could be the most important job in the entire resistance. But if this man is not freed it might very well be the end of everything.
营救线升级全书,plot 87。
“Would you start by telling me just who you are and how Orla got into my sister’s house.”
多重身份张力,cast 86。
She had just enough time to read the two words there before the courtesy light went out. CAR BUGGED.
纸条节奏紧,pace 85。
“It’s a monstrosity, a bastard combination of antique piping, worn valves—and modern electronic technology.”
开场工业句干净,prose 84。
The satellites will die if we cut off supplies. The planets as well. … Each needs the other to survive. And we control the relationship.
行星分工帝国,world 88。
He dropped the match—even before he had lit the joint—and it fell into the pool of liquid at his feet. Sudden blue flame leaped high.
失火立等级暴力,hook 89。
We follow each plot, help it to flourish, encourage the dissatisfied to join. Then crush it.
控局叛乱命题,innov 85。
Jan turned about, faced away, the prisoner dismissing his jailer. … In the end, Jan was the one who smiled.
权力翻转收束,ending 90。
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