Gene Wolfe
《Shadow and Claw》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 93.4/100,原型归为「氛围沉思」。八个维度中,最强的是文笔(97 分),相对最弱的是节奏(88 分)。本评分基于样本开窗,各维度给分均附正文摘句证据,属单次可审计尺规评审,非众包星级或安利榜。
"mobi omnibus Shadow+Claw; reanchor past translator note to Severian gate open; mid Lake of Birds Cas; late Vodalus alzabo oath; reanchor end past TOC to 'no easy road' pause. Four windows on omnibus only."
I’ve a fellow there to whom I must transmit certain instructions, and I have learned that the troupe of players to which you once belonged will be admitted there for a thiasus
盟誓派往 Absolute,plot 91。
This brown water rolling over her face, and her eyes opening blue through the brown. I have to go to sleep five, six times every night
捞尸人执念立人,cast 90。
The breeze was gone. It was as if some unquiet spirit had haunted the gathering, then suddenly vanished.
药雾换气节拍,pace 88。
In the final reckoning there is only love, only that divinity. That we are capable only of being what we are remains our unforgivable sin.
神学句压卷,prose 97。
the thousands of paces of wall stretching across the slum and sweeping up the hill until at last they met the high curtain wall of the Citadel.
城墙地理立世界,world 96。
The locked and rusted gate that stood before us, with wisps of river fog threading its spikes like the mountain paths, remains in my mind now as the symbol of my exile.
开篇即象征,hook 95。
Just as all that appears imperishable tends toward its own destruction, those moments that at the time seem the most fleeting recreate themselves
记忆本体论方法,innov 96。
Here I pause. If you wish to walk no farther with me, reader, I do not blame you. It is no easy road.
直接对读者收束,ending 94。
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