Thomas Mann
《Death in Venice》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 93.5/100,原型归为「架构史诗」。八个维度中,最强的是文笔(96 分),相对最弱的是节奏(91 分)。本评分基于样本开窗,各维度给分均附正文摘句证据,属单次可审计尺规评审,非众包星级或安利榜。
"mobi omnibus of 7 stories; ONLY Death in Venice scored. Rebuilt open/mid/late/end strictly inside DEATH IN VENICE (1912)…news of his death (before author bio). Other stories not scored."
“But you are staying on, signore; you are not afraid of the sickness.” Aschenbach looked at him. “The sickness?” he repeated.
瘟疫暗示推进弧,plot 93。
for some reason or other he turned round before crossing the threshold… his strangely twilight-gray eyes met those of Aschenbach
目光交接立欲望,cast 92。
he whispered the standing formula of the heart’s desire—impossible here, absurd, depraved, ludicrous and sacred nevertheless… “I love you!”
告白后立刻切瘟疫章,pace 91。
It was the smile of Narcissus as he bows his head over the mirroring water, that profound, fascinated, protracted smile
神话比喻密,prose 96。
he suddenly scented in the air a peculiar aroma… a sweetish, medicinal smell that suggested squalor and wounds and suspect cleanliness.
气味立病城,world 94。
On a spring afternoon in 19—, … Gustav Aschenbach… had set out from his apartment on the Prinzregentenstrasse in Munich to take a walk of some length by himself.
独行即命运起点,hook 94。
He meditated on the mysterious combination into which the canonical and the individual must enter for human beauty to come into being
美学沉思嵌欲望,innov 93。
He was carried to his room. And later that same day the world was respectfully shocked to receive the news of his death.
公众讣告冷收,ending 95。
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