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Outcasts United

Warren St. John

89.4 / 100

《Outcasts United》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 89.4/100,原型归为「扎实参考」。八个维度中,最强的是世界观(92 分),相对最弱的是文笔(87 分)。本评分基于样本开窗,各维度给分均附正文摘句证据,属单次可审计尺规评审,非众包星级或安利榜。

阅读协议 · coverage_notes

"mobi; open Luma Amman OK; mid practice conditioning; late Mandela/Santos collapse; reanchor end past Author's Note/sources/interview to epilogue 'Beautiful!' coda. Four windows."

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plot 89 late Mandela quit
Mandela had all but quit. For the rest of the half, whenever he got the ball, he turned and made a furious and lonely dash for the Santos’ goal—dribbling all the way and refusing to pass

队内裂痕成情节,plot 89。

cast 90 open soft spot
“Luma’s very sensitive but she never shows it. She doesn’t want anyone to know where her soft spot is.”

坚硬外壳立人,cast 90。

pace 88 mid run them
When boys misbehaved, she’d run them to exhaustion.

训练节拍即纪律,pace 88。

prose 87 end Beautiful
“Beautiful!” he called out, his voice echoing across the complex’s terraced array of green fields. “Beautiful! Beautiful! Beautiful!”

口语回声收束,prose 87。

world 92 mid neighborhood watch
The commotion had a way of drawing in the rest of the neighborhood. Young children on the jungle gym climbed higher on the bars to get a better view.

社区围观立世界,world 92。

hook 91 open Mercedes keys
At the age of three, Luma idly mentioned … a set of keys to the Mercedes, which, they were told, now belonged to their three-year-old daughter.

宠爱细节开门,hook 91。

innov 88 open sangria refusal
When the drink arrived, Luma began to sob uncontrollably. … He asked the waitress to take the sangria away.

童年权威倒转预示教练,innov 88。

ending 90 end unbeaten streak
The Fugees were ahead 5–1, their unbeaten streak alive.

场上胜利作余波,ending 90。

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