Walter Kirn
《Lost in the Meritocracy: The Undereducation of an Overachiever》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 90.4/100,原型归为「扎实参考」。八个维度中,最强的是钩子(94 分),相对最弱的是人物(87 分)。本评分基于样本开窗,各维度给分均附正文摘句证据,属单次可审计尺规评审,非众包星级或安利榜。
"mobi; reanchor past also-by/dedication to SAT bus open; mid Princeton/prom; late poetry workshop; end pneumonia/Huck Finn before copyright. Four windows."
And so, belatedly, haltingly, accidentally, and quite implausibly and incredibly, it began at last: my education.
肺炎夜封住反绩优弧,plot 90。
Well, wherever you go,” he said, “skip the drinking games, don’t buy acid or uppers on the street, and always—I want you to promise—wear a rubber.
过渡导师声口准,cast 87。
With one drop of blood, the workshop became a hunt.
课堂猎杀加速,pace 88。
Flexibility, irony, self-consciousness, contrarianism. They’d gotten me through Princeton
列举刀口利,prose 92。
stuck behind a lumbering Case tractor in the land of grain silos and barns where my family lives on a small farm that we cultivate, Amish style, with a team of horses
舞台布景式西部,world 89。
a few of my closest buddies seal their fates by opening pint bottles of cherry schnapps the moment we leave the high-school parking lot.
筛选日自毁开场,hook 94。
about the new class that the system had created, which I was now part of, for better or for worse. The class that runs things.
绩优阶级自觉,innov 90。
Instead of filling in the blanks, I wanted to be a blank and be filled in.
反填空收束,ending 93。
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