Wallace Stegner
《All the Little Live Things》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 90.5/100,原型归为「均衡佳作」。八个维度中,最强的是结局(94 分),相对最弱的是节奏(87 分)。本评分基于样本开窗,各维度给分均附正文摘句证据,属单次可审计尺规评审,非众包星级或安利榜。
"mobi; reanchor past Penguin TOC/bio to rain study opening; mid Peck treehouse Julie horse; late Fourth vodka shame; end whale-milk sorrow conversion before paperback ads. Four windows."
And so even in the gnashing of my teeth I acknowledge my conversion. … I shall be richer all my life for this sorrow.
丧痛翻转为弧,plot 89。
For a man who spent so much time insuring his privacy, Peck seemed to be enjoying the intrusion. “Sure,” he said. “She’ll have to leave the horse, though.”
嬉皮客反讽立像,cast 90。
Later, Lucio and I made an acetylene cannon out of a length of soil pipe, and shortly … were happily blowing tin cans and plugs of wood fifty feet down into the gully.
派对胡闹加速,pace 87。
I sit here watching evening and the winter rains come on together, and I feel as slack and dull as the day or the season. Or not slack so much as bruised.
天气即心境,prose 93。
Julie took in Peck, the tent behind him, the ladder, the crooked little gable among the branches, the littered flat. “Gee!” she said. “How neat!”
溪底树屋立界,world 92。
HALF HOUR AFTER I came down here, the rains began. They came without fuss, the thin edge of a circular Pacific storm
雨线无声切入,hook 91。
Think of the force down there, just telling things to get born… One of the things that’s in whale’s milk is the promise of pain and death.
生物力对花园伦理,innov 88。
Would I forgo the pleasure of her company to escape the bleakness of her loss? … Not for a moment. … I shall be richer all my life for this sorrow.
拒抹杀哀伤,ending 94。
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