Kay Redfield Jamison
《An Unquiet Mind》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 89.0/100,原型归为「扎实参考」。八个维度中,最强的是钩子(93 分),相对最弱的是世界观(85 分)。本评分基于样本开窗,各维度给分均附正文摘句证据,属单次可审计尺规评审,非众包星级或安利榜。
"mobi; reanchor past Part TOC to Prologue UCLA parking mania; mid lithium-refusing patient death + Charnel House depression; late England restore / return to clinic; end choose illness / limitless corners (cut Ack). Four windows."
He had a terrible disease and it eventually cost him his life—as it does tens of thousands of people every year.
拒药线收尸,plot 88。
“Don’t leave me, Dr. Jamison. Please, please don’t leave me.” I assured him I would stay with him until he got to the ward.
医患黏着立人,cast 87。
Inevitably, the year passed: the snows and warming brandies of the English winter gave way to the soft rains and white wines of early summer.
季节换档节拍,pace 86。
I seemed to myself to be dull, boring, inadequate, thick brained, unlit, unresponsive, chill skinned, bloodless, and sparrow drab.
抑郁词堆精确,prose 92。
when it’s two o’clock in the morning, and you’re manic, even the UCLA Medical Center has a certain appeal.
医院夜景世界,world 85。
“We’re both on the faculty in the psychiatry department.” The policeman looked at us, smiled, went back to his squad car, and drove away. Being professors of psychiatry explained everything.
反讽钩死开场,hook 93。
Strangely enough I think I would choose to have it. It’s complicated.
双重视点自问,innov 90。
I cannot imagine becoming jaded to life, because I know of those limitless corners, with their limitless views.
药与爱收束,ending 91。
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