Justin Evans
《The White Devil》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 88.8/100，原型归为「均衡佳作」。八个维度中，最强的是钩子（91 分），相对最弱的是人物（87 分）。本评分基于样本开窗，各维度给分均附正文摘句证据，属单次可审计尺规评审，非众包星级或安利榜。
"mobi; reanchor past TOC to prologue fever death; mid Byron/Augusta kiss rehearsal; late Fawkes confession / Cambridge letters; end cut before Acknowledgments (straw hats into black). Four windows."
I found some letters in the cistern room. Old letters. I gave them to Dr. Kahn.
物证推进咒解弧，plot 88。
With Roddy getting sick, I feel more protective of you boys. That’s all. You especially, Andrew.
舍监愧疚可见，cast 87。
“You want to kiss voraciously?” He was rendered speechless by this question.
排练戏推欲望节拍，pace 88。
It had seized him, like a beast, a monkey sinking fangs into him, clinging to him and weighing him down
病体比喻狠，prose 89。
the Lot rose before him now, a shambling Victorian mansion, ascending four stories to an old-fashioned cross-gabled roof.
哈罗空间立住，world 90。
It was going to kill him. It was going to kill all of them.
瘟疫序章开门，hook 91。
If I give it to her with a story about Byron’s lover committing murder, she’ll publish it.
文学发现绑鬼案，innov 88。
He watched them, until the two straw hats vanished into the black.
友谊/鬼影未解收，ending 89。
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