K. J. Parker
《The Hammer》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 89.9/100,原型归为「文笔流」。八个维度中,最强的是文笔(92 分),相对最弱的是结局(88 分)。本评分基于样本开窗,各维度给分均附正文摘句证据,属单次可审计尺规评审,非众包星级或安利榜。
"mobi; reanchor past front matter to Seven Years Before chickens; mid old-man ambassador/no word for war; late Luso flower-press visit; end wedding name-swap still legal before TOC. Four windows."
“Father cancelled me,” Gignomai said. “Didn’t he copy you in?”
除名成中段引擎,plot 89。
“They’re not yours, of course,” Stheno said, “you’re just looking after them. … Father thinks it’s time you learned about taking responsibility.”
兄长发鸡立家法,cast 90。
“Why are you here?” “To ask you to come to the wedding,” Luso replied. “It wouldn’t be right if you weren’t there.” “Sorry,” Gignomai said quickly, “can’t. Too busy.”
短来回切场,pace 88。
“My dear fellow, we don’t even have a word for war. We use the same word to mean fight, shout and sulk.”
冷句建文明差,prose 92。
“Once I’d helped them with their language studies… I was handed over to the met’Alp family, as a gift.”
人质外交地图,world 91。
One paling was rotten at the base… Two days later, something broke in during the night and killed the chickens.
责任课立刻失败,hook 90。
“What the hell is this contraption in aid of?” “It’s a flower press,” Gignomai said. “Don’t touch that.”
机械替代法术,innov 91。
The priest got his name the wrong way round: Bassianus Severus Arcadius. On the way home, he asked if it was still legal. His father assured him that it was.
错名仍成婚,ending 88。
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