Jessica Mitford
《The American Way of Death Revisited》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 90.8/100,原型归为「扎实参考」。八个维度中,最强的是世界观(95 分),相对最弱的是人物(84 分)。本评分基于样本开窗,各维度给分均附正文摘句证据,属单次可审计尺规评审,非众包星级或安利榜。
"mobi; reanchor past blurbs to embalming excision fight; mid pre-need installments; late FTC gutting; end funeral-jargon echo. Four windows."
the changes have left consumers at serious risk” and had “effectively gutted consumer protection
监管回潮成情节,plot 88。
Victor Gollancz and the editor at Houghton Mifflin with one accord demanded the excision of this passage.
出版审查当对手,cast 84。
The sales organization usually works on a 50 percent commission
数字刺点,pace 90。
Hoping to infuse this admittedly revolting subject with a touch of macabre humor
自陈文风,prose 94。
the embalming room, which is strictly off-limits to the public, and especially to the family of the deceased.
禁地消费世界,world 95。
We think that you make your book harder to sell by going at too much length and in too gooey detail into the process of embalming.
禁写即钩子,hook 93。
Sunset View’s ‘Before Need’ ownership plan offers the opportunity for purchasing family lots in monthly installments so small that they are hardly noticeable
死亡分期付款,innov 92。
“Embalming is first and foremost an essential public health measure.
业界话术反讽,ending 90。
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