William Strunk Jr. (ed. Chris Hong)
《The Elements of Style》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 87.4/100,原型归为「扎实参考」。八个维度中,最强的是文笔(97 分),相对最弱的是人物(70 分)。本评分基于样本开窗,各维度给分均附正文摘句证据,属单次可审计尺规评审,非众包星级或安利榜。
"mobi 2011 Hong ed.; reanchor to introductory aims; mid active voice; end window pinned to 'Vigorous writing is concise' (book closes with lists). Four windows."
concentrating attention (in Chapters II and III) on a few essentials, the rules of usage and principles of composition most commonly violated
课程弧,plot 82。
It aims to lighten the task of instructor and student
师生角色薄,cast 70。
11. Use the active voice.
编号节拍,pace 90。
Vigorous writing is concise. A sentence should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences… but that every word tell.
元散文示范,prose 97。
This book is intended for use in English courses in which the practice of composition is combined with the study of literature.
课堂世界,world 78。
It aims to give in brief space the principal requirements of plain English style.
承诺精简,hook 92。
concentrating attention… on a few essentials
以少胜多教学法,innov 94。
for the same reason that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts
类比钉死,ending 96。
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