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From the Earth to the Moon; and, Round the Moon

Jules Verne

89.5 / 100

《From the Earth to the Moon; and, Round the Moon》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 89.5/100,原型归为「世界构筑流」。八个维度中,最强的是创新(96 分),相对最弱的是节奏(84 分)。本评分基于样本开窗,各维度给分均附正文摘句证据,属单次可审计尺规评审,非众包星级或安利榜。

阅读协议 · coverage_notes

"Gutenberg #83 (both novels). open: Ch.I Gun Club peacetime boredom and colossal artillery; ~25%: Michel Ardan's telegram 'I shall go inside' / passenger-of-the-Atlanta uproar; ~75%: Round the Moon Barbicane lectures on lunar day/night and Earth-as-moon; ending: From the Earth Ch.XXVIII 'A New Star' — projectile detected in lunar orbit, Maston still watching at Long's Peak."

八维证据 (无 JS 可读)

plot 87 Ch.I → Ch.XXVIII · sample_print_v0
Substitute for your spherical shell a cylindro-conical projectile. I shall go inside. Shall arrive by steamer Atlanta. MICHEL ARDAN.

Gun Club wager → Columbiad build → launch → (Round the Moon) projectile survival and lunar flyby; Ardan's telegram turns engineering spectacle into passenger adventure, so plot scores 87.

cast 88 Ch.XVIII · Michel Ardan vs Barbicane
If ever two individuals offered a striking contrast to each other, these were certainly Michel Ardan and the Yankee Barbicane; both, moreover, being equally enterprising and daring, each in his own way.

Barbicane's imperturbable presidency, Nicholl's rivalry, Michel Ardan's comic audacity, J. T. Maston's one-armed devotion create a memorable quartet, so cast scores 88.

pace 84 Round the Moon Ch.XIV · Night of Three Hundred and Fifty-Four Hours · ~75%
It was "that blackness" in which the lunar nights are insteeped, which last three hundred and fifty-four hours and a half at each point of the disc, a long night resulting from the equality of the translatory and rotary movements of the moon.

First volume races through club politics and casting; Round the Moon slows into orbital physics and lunar geography lectures, so pace scores 84.

prose 88 Ch.I · American artillery satire
but their cannon, howitzers, and mortars are mere pocket-pistols compared with the formidable engines of the American artillery.

Verne's satirical precision on American gunnery and Barbicane's deadpan lectures make speculative machinery legible, so prose scores 88.

world 94 Ch.I · Gun Club founding
Thus was formed the nucleus of the "Gun Club." In a single month after its formation it numbered 1,833 effective members and 30,565 corresponding members.

Baltimore Gun Club, Stones Hill Columbiad, Florida launch, Rocky Mountain telescope — industrial modernity turned cosmic, so world scores 94.

hook 94 Ch.I · peacetime boredom · open anchor
"This is horrible!" said Tom Hunter one evening, while rapidly carbonizing his wooden legs in the fireplace of the smoking-room; "nothing to do! nothing to look forward to! what a loathsome existence!"

Ch.I Gun Club amputees carbonizing wooden legs in peacetime boredom — immediately frames the absurd scale of what follows, so hook scores 94.

innov 96 Ch.XVIII · passenger-of-the-Atlanta
Substitute for your spherical shell a cylindro-conical projectile. I shall go inside. Shall arrive by steamer Atlanta.

Pre-Apollo moon-shot mechanics (cannon-launch, human passenger inside the shell) — foundational hard-SF adventure premise, so innov scores 96.

ending 85 Ch.XXVIII · A New Star · ending anchor
The elements of this new star we have as yet been unable to determine; we do not yet know the velocity of its passage. The distance which separates it from the surface of the moon may be estimated at about 2,833 miles.

'A New Star' leaves voyagers orbiting the moon indefinitely — formally complete yet deliberately open; Maston's faith at Long's Peak supplies emotional coda, so ending scores 85.

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