Dan Simmons
《A Winter Haunting》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 92.4/100，原型归为「均衡佳作」。八个维度中，最强的是钩子（94 分），相对最弱的是节奏（91 分）。本评分基于样本开窗，各维度给分均附正文摘句证据，属单次可审计尺规评审，非众包星级或安利榜。
"Local mobi; open/mid/late/end + full.txt (41 years after I died, Barguest mail, cemetery figure)."
FORTY-ONE years after I died, my friend Dale returned to the farm where I was murdered.
四十一年后回凶场，故情节 92。
we must come to the ineluctable conclusion that God is a thug.
童言刺神立性格，故人物 92。
Then where the hell did the “You’ve got mail” voice come from? It had been the AOL voice.
离线机播邮件催速，故节奏 91。
“GOD SAT ON A LONELY HILL ABOVE JOHNSTOWN TODAY, LOOKING DOWN IN SORROW AT NATURE’S FIERCE DESTRUCTION.”
新闻轶事开场，故文笔 92。
A single figure stands far back there in the snow amidst the headstones
雪地墓园立世界，故世界 92。
FORTY-ONE years after I died, my friend Dale returned to the farm where I was murdered.
亡者开场即钩，故钩子 94。
›barguest Dale laughed out loud. What kind of self-respecting ghost would identify itself as a bar guest?
鬼用网名，故创新 93。
If there are other ghosts here, they are not mine.
拒认他鬼收束，故结局 93。
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