Stephen King (as Richard Bachman)
《Blaze》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 90.9/100,原型归为「均衡佳作」。八个维度中,最强的是人物(92 分),相对最弱的是结局(90 分)。本评分基于样本开窗,各维度给分均附正文摘句证据,属单次可审计尺规评审,非众包星级或安利榜。
"Local mobi Bachman; open/mid/late used (George voice, wallet, Bluenote); end file mixes aftermatter."
“Not that one, you dummy, it’s got bumper stickers all over it. Get a Chevy or a Ford."
选车规则立犯罪学徒,故情节 91。
Blaze felt panic start. It came up his throat. “Hey, no, I ain’t never done this before."
恐慌对话立人物,故人物 92。
Soon his footsteps were lost in the heartbeat
脚步消失逼独自动手,故节奏 90。
GEORGE WAS SOMEWHERE in the dark. Blaze couldn’t see him, but the voice came in loud and clear
亡声在暗,故文笔 91。
The air was bitterly cold. He had hitched him a ride into town
寒夜停车场立世界,故世界 91。
“Not that one, you dummy, it’s got bumper stickers all over it."
禁贴条即钩,故钩子 92。
George always sounded as if he had a cold.
死者声线伴行,故创新 90。
His breathing seemed fast, his nose was running, and his chest sounded rattly.
婴儿发烧压尾,故结局 90。
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