Stephen King (as Richard Bachman)
《Rage》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 91.3/100，原型归为「均衡佳作」。八个维度中，最强的是钩子（93 分），相对最弱的是结局（90 分）。本评分基于样本开窗，各维度给分均附正文摘句证据，属单次可审计尺规评审，非众包星级或安利榜。
"Local mobi Bachman; open/mid/late/end + full.txt (Placerville High, Charlie Decker, classroom siege)."
"Charles Decker to the office, please. Charles Decker. Thank you."
广播点名开启事变，故情节 91。
"A drunken old bitch of a mother. That surely is disgusting, Ted."
逼人自揭立群像，故人物 92。
Carol Granger gasped, and the spell was broken.
咒语破裂转场，故节奏 91。
It comes right up to the building and says howdy.
草坪拟人，故文笔 92。
The lawn of Placerville High School is a very good one. It does not fuck around.
高中草坪立日常，故世界 90。
The morning I got it on was nice; a nice May morning.
开场即钩，故钩子 93。
"Either all brains or all cunt," Carol said with brittle good humor.
教室变成坦白庭，故创新 91。
That's the end. I have to turn off the light now. Good night.
病房关灯收束，故结局 90。
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