Stephen King
《Thinner》在 Babelspan 八维工艺分中得 91.6/100，原型归为「均衡佳作」。八个维度中，最强的是钩子（93 分），相对最弱的是创新（91 分）。本评分基于样本开窗，各维度给分均附正文摘句证据，属单次可审计尺规评审，非众包星级或安利榜。
"Local mobi Bachman as King; open/mid/late/end + full.txt (Thinner curse, Halleck, Gypsy pie)."
such things as werewolves and Gypsy curses. … that’s how these guys have been able to
不信诅咒即中招，故情节 92。
If you continue to lose weight, we’ll run an entire metabolic series on you
医学语言挡魔法，故人物 91。
stopped complimenting him on his weight loss; when had that started?
赞美停了才知糟，故节奏 91。
“Thinner.” He came awake with a jerk… and almost screamed.
一词惊醒，故文笔 92。
the older Gypsy in the Oshkosh biballs
市集细节立世界，故世界 91。
“Thinner.”
单字即钩，故钩子 93。
he still needed all the calories he could get.
热量需求成诅咒反讽，故创新 91。
Eat hearty, Billy Halleck whispered… and cut himself a piece of Gypsy pie.
切馅饼收束，故结局 92。
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